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專四題目：
It is a problem these days that more and more young people are becoming addicted to computer games, Some people say that this virtual world cuts them off from the real world. What is your opinion about this?
專四范文：
Computer Games Are a Form of Escapism
電腦游戲是逃避現實的一種形式
Are computer games a boon in terms ofhelping students relax after a long day's work at school? Or are theydetrimental to pupils’ future development since students can become easilyaddicted to the virtual world? Personally, I am in sympathy with the latter.
電腦游戲有利于幫助學生在學校忙碌很長時間之后，得到放松嗎？還是因為學生很容易沉迷于網絡虛擬世界，而不利于學生未來發展呢？就我個人而言,我贊成后者。
Admittedly, computer games furnishentertainment when students only spend a moderate amount of time on them. Itmight even be beneficial since pupils can combine study with pleasure andtherefore achieve high efficiency. However, the hard truth is that droves ofstudents end up being obsessed with computer games and view them as a way toescape from reality. As a result, academic study is inevitably neglected. And avicious circle is created-the more frustrated students are about study, themore addicted they become to the virtual world. Furthermore, not only pupils’academic performance may suffer from playing computer games, the violencefeatured in such games may also exert an impact on impressionable teenagers.When the dividing line between the virtual and the real world is blurred,students may resort to violence in order to solve issues-as they do in games.Authoritative reports have confirmed that the increasing rate of violentincidents is ascribable toll the prevalent trend of playing computer games.
不可否認,如果學生只花適量的時間玩電腦游戲，那么電腦游戲確實是一種娛樂方式。它甚至可能對學生有益，因為學生可以將學習與娛樂相結合，從而實現高效率。然而,事實上,大批學生最終沉迷于電腦游戲，并將電腦游戲視為逃避現實的一種方式。因此,學術研究肯定會被忽視。惡性循環就是，學生對學習越是感到灰心，就會越沉迷于虛擬世界。此外,不僅學生的成績可能會因玩電腦游戲而下降,游戲中的暴力特征也會對處于敏感時期的青少年產生影響。當虛擬和現實世界之間的界限變得模糊時,學生可能會訴諸暴力，按照游戲中的方式來解決問題。權威報道證實, 由于玩電腦游戲的人日漸增多，暴力事件發生率也逐漸上升。
In sum, the demerits of computer games faroutweigh their few merits because of the tendency for students to neglectacademic study and because some students may become more violent. (238 words)
總之,電腦游戲的缺點遠遠大于它們的一些優點,因為學生會逐漸忽視學術研究,而且有些學生可能會變得更加暴力。(238字)
譯文屬可可英語原創，未經允許，不得轉載。
