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每天的寫作任務是這樣的,寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱(如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明),我們將進入互批作文模式。
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42. What is a very important skill a person shouldlearn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and usespecific reasons and examples to support your choice.
參見:[15]。也可以用[27]作為答案。 |
42、計算機技能是最重要的 |
Topic 42 An importantskill
Success has been an issue broadly discussed and defined bydifferent approaches. Some say that being successful means being wealthy.Others associate success with popularity and power. A third approach wouldrelate success with social and emotional well-being. So we come to thequestions: “When can be someone considered successful?” and “What skills makesuccess easier to achieve?"
In order to answer the second question, we should have apoint of view about what success is. I consider that someone is reallysuccessful when that person is able to handle and enjoy social relationships. Aleader can be powerful and recognized, but if he is unable to enjoy his leadershipand feels lonely because he cannot establish a deep friendship, can we reallysay such leader is successful? On the other hand, a wealthy person may have allthe possessions money can buy, but again, what if he cannot manage a marriageor a friendship? This person is likely to feel lonely and unsatisfied.
Developing social abilities may be a very helpful skillfor a person to learn, in order to be successful in the social emotional sideof his or her life. One ability to develop could be effective and assertivecommunication. Many misunderstandings and conflicts can be prevented if we expressour ideas clearly and respectfully, and if we learn to ask for clarificationwhen we feel threatened or offended by something someone told us. Anotherability could be learning to handle teamwork. We need to learn to work withothers at work, at home, at school, in our community. Getting into an agreementwith our parents, children, coworkers and friends is a situation that can becomehard to handle sometimes. Dealing with teamwork can be really helpful. Finallywe could add the ability to deal with conflicts with others and conflicts with ourown wishes or decisions. We will always find obstacles in our paths; it can bequite useful to know how to overcome them.
In my opinion, I would define success as being able to enjoywhat you have, what you do and who you deal with everyday. And to achievesuccess, you should have skills that help you handle relationships with yourpeers. We are social creatures; we need each other to succeed, and to enjoy oursuccess.
好了,今天就說這么多,大家一定要堅持練習作文,每天進步一小點,一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升!希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去,寫作都是硬功夫,跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的,功夫到家自然成,加油!
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