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我已經(jīng)托福三戰(zhàn)過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發(fā)郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務(wù)是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發(fā)至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

40. Theexpression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stopworking for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Topic 40 Never, never giveup

Continuous exertion may sound very exhausting and thus,it is understandable even if some people suggest it should be better to give upsometimes. It is true at some points because the human race is not almightycreature. However I would say it is not about giving up, but just changing agoal. Recognizing life events as a sequence, I think even when giving upsomething, it is just adjusting the goal to more reachable level and processesfor previous goals always play a role in reaching next goal.

In the first place, I would like to emphasize that thisis not only about the youth becoming competent, but also about all the peoplemaking their own lives more comfortable and enjoyable. For instance, bothfollowing examples I present can be seen as continuous exertion: a young persontrying to become a professional musician and a person on the verge of deathexercising hands in order to move them better than the previous day. If their goalsare too high for them, the young person may have to change it to be working ina related field such as becoming a commentator, a voice trainer or so, and thedying person may have to change it to exercise fingers instead of hands. Thatis, people naturally keep trying in any case until the last minute they acceptdeath.

Furthermore, there are also two advantages of indomitableattitudes. Firstly, some different approaches to a goal are necessary, otherthan blind efforts. Such a contrivance activates brain and makes human beingsmore alive. I do not think it is exaggerative（夸張的）to say.

Secondly, this attitude is also important when trying to achievesomething extraordinary, because chances and right ideas do not always lie alltogether. Other chances and ideas never show up if it is given up. Totallydifferent idea or better chances sometimes appear after groping in the dark.

There is no doubt about favorable influencesof continuous exertion. Whether agree or disagree with the statement of thistopic, people keep trying by nature and it does make us alive. When I have noenergy left to keep trying, I simply keep it on my mind so as not to miss any possibilities.In other words, it is possible to keep trying even when feeling like giving up.

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習(xí)作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質(zhì)的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

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