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Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^
我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。
每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。
在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！
39. Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn moreinformation and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.
參考分析： 不能完全同意。要表明It islargely truethat (把statement換個句子結構寫進來)。
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39、同意在技術的幫助下，學生能夠可以學習到更多的信息，并且學得更快 |
Topic 39 Can newtechnologies help students?
“With the help of technology students nowadays can learnmore information and learn it more quickly." I agree with this statement.Technology has helped a student cross national boundaries, open up new viewsand increase the speed at which he imbibes information.（吸收信息）
New technology in the form of Internet has helped breachthe limitations of a country's frontiers. A student sitting in a small town of India can access thelatest course material released by MIT on his topic of interest. He can gainaccess to the latest info that his happening in physics and thus improve hisexisting warehouse of knowledge. He can browse through the previous papers inphysics and dwell deeper and deeper in his specialized study. And how long doesthis all take? A click of a mouse. Compare this with searching through themazes of his small hometown library, only to find some outdated articles andconsuming a great part of his daily activity.
Technology has helped open up many new avenues that previouslywere considered impossible. Take for example the simple LCD projectors. Theygive a visual feel of the subject that the student is studying helping him tolearn not only quickly but also effectively. Or for that matter of videoconferencing.（電視會議）A student can askquestions and clear his lingering doubts（清除他的懷疑）when he interacts with a professor consideredas the authority in his field.
An overlooked aspect of technology is the transportation.With rapid advances in transportation, a student in
In concluding I would like to say that technology has playeda major role not only in increasing the speed at which students learn but alsoin bringing a radical change in the way they learn it.
好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）
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