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每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。
在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！
41. Some people think that human needs forfarmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land forendangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why orwhy not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
參考分析： 選擇不同意更好寫一些。列舉兩三個保護endangered animals的重要性。同時不要忘了說明人類也確實需要更多的土地。只不過不能只顧眼前利益(short term benefits)而已。 |
41、不同意人類對于農田、房屋和工業的需要要比保護瀕危動物重要 |
Topic 41 Should land besaved for animals?
In the past, there have been many endangered animals. Nowthey are extinct. Does it matter? Has our environment been affected by theirabsence? Has the quality of our own life been changed? The answer to thesequestions is "Yes. "
It does matter if we destroy an endangered specieshabitat to develop more farmland, housing or industrial parks. There is adelicate balance of nature. If one small part is removed, it will affect allthe other parts. For example, if certain trees are cut down, bats will have noplace to roost. If they cannot roost, they cannot breed. If there are no bats,there will be no animal, or bird to eat certain insects that plague our crops.
Our environment has been affected by the absence of certainanimals. Certain flowers are pollinated by butterflies that migrate from Canada to Mexico. Some of the breedinggrounds of these butterflies were destroyed. Now these flowers are disappearingfrom certain areas. We will no longer be able to enjoy their beauty.
The quality of our life has been changed. America used tobe covered with giant trees. Now we have to visit them in one small park.Rainforests around the world are being cut down to make room for humans. Wewill never be able to see or study this fragile ecosystem.
I would encourage us humans to look for otheralternatives for our farmlands, housing, and industries. We have alternatives;the animals do not.
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