Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^

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每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

43. Why do you think some people are attracted todangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons andexamples to support your answer.

Topic 43 Dangerous sport

Have you experienced the fear of bungee jumping? Have youever enjoyed the excitement of car racing? Nowadays, more and more people areattracted to such dangerous activities, especially the young people. Wonderingwhy? After thinking about the lifestyle of those people, the reason goes asfollows.

While the world is becoming more and more competitive, thetasks on each person's shoulders become heavier and heavier. People's everydayactivities are very intense. The best way to relax and get relieved is to go infor dangerous activities, because while you are doing something dangerous, youhave to concentrate on it, and you cannot think about anything else. Hence yourelieved all the unhappiness and the troubles you had in the daily work.

In addition, to take risks and try out new things is oneof human being's basic instincts. People always like to do something new,especially when something is popular as well. According to some statistics, thedangerous activities are becoming extremely popular among young people. If youdo not try some dangerous activities, people will think that you are a cowardand you are afraid of doing it. So it is reasonable enough for them to dodangerous sports to show their braveness.

However, I do not like dangerous activities and I believethe phenomenon that people are attracted to dangerous activities is just a whim.After realizing countless disadvantages of them, people will reconsider aboutthem. Some safer activities to help people to get relieved will be developedafterwards.

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最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

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