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45. Some people prefer to get up early in themorning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day andwork until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons andexamples to support your choice.
參考分析: 這是個非常私人的問題。盡管很多人都喜歡睡懶覺,但是“早起的好處”應該更容易寫一些。
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45、我更喜歡早上起的早些 |
Topic 45 Get up early vs.stay up late
Some people prefer to get up early in the morning to startthe day's work; while other people like to get up later in the day to workuntil late at night. Which option do you prefer? I would choose to get up earlyin the morning. This view is based on the following reasons.
By getting up early in the morning you can enjoy a lot ofgood things that the nature offers. You can breath fresh air, smell aroma offlowers, listen the birds singing in the morning. What a beautiful world! Inthe meantime, these can refresh our brains and quickly get ready for the day's work.We can immediately concentrate on the work, and solve the problems with greatefficiency. For example, when I was in senior middle school, I got up early inthe morning everyday to go over my lessons and prepare for the courses that Iwould have that day. I found it was so efficient and I memorized my studymaterial so deeply. On the contrary, people who get up late and go to bed latetend to leave all the day's work to the night, and tend to go to bed until thefinish the day's work. This is not a good living habit and also not anefficiently way of working.
Another reason why I would like to get up early to starta day's work is because I believe that it is good for our health. The body'scycle follows the nature: when the sun rises, it is time to get up; when themoon rises, it is time to go to bed. Besides, by getting up early we can have timeto do some exercises such as jogging, hiking and swimming, which will benefitour health. Many statistics show that most people who live a long life get upearly and go to bed early. While getting up late and go to bed late violateshuman biology and therefore will do harm to the health. And people who get uplate never got a chance to do morning exercises.
In a word, getting up early is a smart choice for people;it can benefit both people's work and health.
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