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44. Some people like to travel with a companion.Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasonsand examples to support your choice.
參考分析: 分別討論兩種方式的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(relative merits),然后說(shuō),具體的選擇要視情況而定。 相關(guān)題目:[111] |
44、更喜歡和同伴旅行 |
Topic 44 Travel with acompanion vs. travel alone
Traveling is a very pleasant thing. Some people like to travelwith several friends. Other people, however, would prefer to travel alone. Asfar as I am concerned, traveling with my friends is better.
Why do some people like to travel alone? For one thing, theycan experience more freedom. They do not need to discuss the itinerary oftravel with others. He/she can just go whenever he/she wants. For another, theydo not need to keep an eye on how to get along with friends.
Although there may be one or more advantages to travelingalone, I insist that traveling with friends is better. In the first place, thetrip will become easy. Traveling is not a very easy activity. For example, youneed to find transportation, hotels and restaurants in new places. Several friendscan share these tasks so that everyone has a chance to enjoy the journey.
In the second place, you can get help when you need. Therewill be many unexpected things that could happen during the journey. Such as,someone gets lost, gets sick, or cannot wake up early for the morning flight.It is very tough for people to handle these situations by themselves especiallywhen they travel to a new place. Friends can give you a hand to overcome allthese difficulties. Every one needs the help from others.
In addition, you can have more fun by traveling with friends.Enjoying the scenic spots is wonderful, while traveling on the road is boring.How to spend this boring time? Talking with friends, playing cards will help.
In conclusion, I prefer to travel with friends ratherthan travel alone not only because the trip will be easier with friends, butalso because I can have more fun by with friends' company.
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