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Morning~AmyLee要認真規(guī)劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優(yōu)秀范文一天寫一篇學(xué)一篇哦，寫好了可以發(fā)送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^
我已經(jīng)托福三戰(zhàn)過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發(fā)郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。
每天的寫作任務(wù)是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發(fā)至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。
在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！
38. Learning about the past has no value for thoseof us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons andexamples to support your answer.
參考分析： 不能同意。No是一個絕對的修飾詞。只要列出三個values or advantages of learning history就可以了。 |
38、學(xué)習(xí)過去對于我們現(xiàn)在是有很大的價值的 |
Topic 38 Is learning aboutthe past useful?
It is often argued that spending much time on studying historyis unreasonable, since the information people obtain lacks the practicalimplementation. However, after careful thought, I have come to disagree withit. I believe that history provides valuable sources for understanding differentpeople and societies, predicting future trends and building a person'sidentity. History generates past experiences and formulates the steps ofdevelopment. It provides us with numerous examples of “cause-effect” events,which help to understand different social mechanisms.
Everything that is happening today stems from the past andwill have direct effect on the future. Being aware of our history helps toavoid old mistakes and make right decisions. The majority of all the politicalconflicts have a long history, for instance the Middle East or Russia- Chechnya tensions. A closer study of their deeperreasons and the measures taken beforehand can prove to be invaluable
in finding the right solution today. It can save thousandsof lives.
At the same time, studying history of our own country or regionbuilds up our identity, gives us a feeling of belonging to a certain group ofpeople. Therefore, if we face a problem of communicating with a person of otherculture, the basic knowledge of his history can prove absolutely necessary fora successful and productive interaction.
To sum up, I strongly believe that it is highlybeneficial for modern people to possess a good knowledge of the history, becauseit assures a profound understanding of social mechanisms, helps to avoid manymistakes and promotes a better communication between different nations. （對過去的歷史有好的了解，可以對社會體制有更深刻的了解，幫助避免一些作物，促進不同國家之間更好的交流）
好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習(xí)作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質(zhì)的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）
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