I’m back~!AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^

我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

8. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Topic 8 Has TV destroyedcommunication?

To agree or disagree with the statement that television has destroyed the communication among family and friends is a matter of balancing its pros and cons（贊成者和反對者）. However, if one considersthe following reasons, he or she may disagree with the title statement as I do.

First, some people may hold the view that friends and family would easily fight with each other for the programs on the television that he or she wants to watch. For example, the child may be likely to switch to（轉變，轉換）the cartoon channel while thefather wants to see the news program, and the mother prefers a romantic movie.However, as far as I am concerned, the scenario is an exaggeration.（這個例子有些夸張）I do not think such a trivial（不重要的，瑣碎的）quarrel would destroy anything important, and as friends or family, the one result is to attribute to（可換due to）the communication. Each person would present their reasons for watching the program, so that next time they would not argue for the same thing again. They know the taste of each number of the family and they will probably try to avoid such conflicts.（文章在反駁，不至于因為這點分歧就鬧得不愉快，如果大家都知道互相的愛好的話，就可以避免這些沖突）

In addition, television offers us numerous（許多的）topics to talk about. Television informs us of what is happening around the world. Everybody has his/her own reaction towards these events. Without television, we may hold the idea that noone would have the chance to share. When the friends and the whole family sit together in front of a television, a nice and intimate（親密的）atmosphere is provided for communication. Through such kind of communication, family members can understand each other better. A small example may give some light to this point. Once I had some disagreement and had not talk to my dad for several days. One night, when my dad and I were watching television together, we found an interesting topic that both of us wanted tosay something about it, so we said a little first and talk much later and allthe unpleasant disappear out of existence.（作者認為，相反的，電視給我們的生活帶來了更多的話題，讓人與人之間的溝通變得更多）

So, in my point of view,nothing has been destroyed by television. On the contrary it might improve our communication.（結尾有點短，可以再多說兩句，總結一下兩個論述段的）

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

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