ATTENTION PLEASE！這周有一個小調(diào)整，我們周二周三休息，雙休日照常學習，僅這周哦！謝謝大家配合~AmyLee非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優(yōu)秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發(fā)送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^

我已經(jīng)托福三戰(zhàn)過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發(fā)郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發(fā)至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

7. How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Topic 7 How do movies or TV affect people?

Movies are popular because people are great watchers. They like to watch other peoples' lives. They like to live vicariously（間接感受到地）. By going to movies, we can escape our own lives, share other people's emotions, and imagine ourselves as someone else.

Many of our lives are not as adventurous or glamorous（迷人的）as the lives in movies. We do not battle evil（不幸的）all day long and then go back to our luxurious penthouse apartment（奢華的屋頂公寓）. We just go to school, do our homework, eat, talk to our friends, and sleep. We need a little excitement in our lives and we find excitement at the movies.（在平凡的生活中尋找點刺激，這確實是看電影的目的之一）

Humans are very emotional people. We all like to cry and laugh. Fortunately, there is not much to cry about in my life so I like to go to sad movies where my heartstrings can be tugged（扣人心弦）. I also like to go to comedies so that I can laugh. I tend to cry and laugh more in a dark movie theater than I do in broad daylight（光天化日，公開的）.（作者又談到一個非常有理有據(jù)的理由，看電影的時候可以釋放自己的情感，不會被人看到，這也是電影的好處之一）

Now I am a student, but I know someday I will be a scientist or a politician or a famous model. When I go to the movies, I can see my role models（楷模）. I see how they act, what they wear, how they talk. I can prepare myself for the day when I will be like them.（作者的這個想法很新穎，他說如果電影中塑造的某一職業(yè)的人物形象和談吐很值得學習的話，他作為某個職業(yè)的人也會向這方面靠近和發(fā)展）

Even though my life is quiet, I can go to the movies and watch someone else's life. I can share their emotions and their everyday life. I wonder if they would like to share mine.（他把電影和生活緊密地聯(lián)系在了一起，我們需要電影來豐富我們的生活，釋放我們的情感，把好的方面作為學習的典范，這三個理由都強有力地說明了電影對人的影響）

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質(zhì)的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

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