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我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

9. Some people prefer to live in a small town.Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in?Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Topic 9 A small town vs. a big city

I grew up in a small town andthen moved to a big city, therefore I have experienced the good and bad sidesof both. I never thought that I would like living in a big city, but I wasproved wrong. After ten years of living in one, I can't imagine ever living ina small town again.（本文的觀點還是追求大城市生活）

Small towns and big citiesboth have some problems in terms of（在…方面）transportation（運輸）, but in different ways. In asmall town, you have to own a car to ensure（確保）a comfortable living. You can't get around without one because thereisn't any kind of public transportation. Big cities generally have heavytraffic and expensive parking, but then you have a choice of taking publictransportation. It's not free, but it's often cheaper than driving when youconsider gas and insurance（保險）. Especially if you don't havea car, you're better off living in a city.

I love the excitement of bigcities. Small towns have a slow pace. Large cities mean you have to adapt to avariety of situations, like finding a new route to work or trying a newrestaurant. I enjoy that challenge very much. Another aspect of the excitementof city living is the variety of cultural activities available. There is a wideassortment（混合物）of theatres, music and danceperformances available in big cities. These things are rare in small towns.（小城市有很多大城市沒有的設施）

The final thing I like aboutlarge cities is the diversity of the people. The United States is made up ofpeople of different races, religions, abilities, and interests. However, youseldom find such a variety of people in a small US town. Living in an area whereeveryone is just like me would quickly make me bored.Of course, security is a concern, and that's one area where small towns are superior to big cities. Still, I would rather be a bit more cautious and live in a large city than to feel secure but bored in a small town.（作者的觀點還是去美國很好，美國有不同人種不同文化）

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

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