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早上好啦~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^
我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。
每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。
在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！
10. "When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
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10、不同意，實際上運氣在人成功的過程中也很重要 |
Topic 10 Luck and hard work
There is a humorous saying in English "The grass is always greener on the other side of the valley." The saying is used ironically（諷刺的）to point out that there is a temptation（引誘物）in us all to insist that others are more fortunate than we are. This isnowhere（一事無成）more true than on the question of luck and hard work. When faced with the "bad times", we often find comfort in the idea that we are special in our degree of misfortune. I feel that such an attitude is negative, and that it can bring only further misfortune.
Many famously successful people have begun from small origins. Mao wasthe son of a (modestly prosperous) peasant; the explorer Captain Cook was sopoor that, as a child, he had to work by day and study by night; many of the affluent Americans of today are the children of the poor immigrants of yesterday. Beethoven（貝多芬）, it should be remembered, became deaf before the end of his career.There are many, many more people who have also made genuine, though Jess spectacular,successes against the odds.
Within his own terms, a person who is born into poverty（貧困的）in Indiais a great success if he manages to own a house in later life. Poverty cannot be reduced by merely complaining and blaming others: no matter how guilty other people are, each individual must reach out to success for himself. Indeed, some economists believe that the world operates by what they call "the rule ofthe jungle." They believe that in economics a person always attempts to gain profit from his neighbor: that given the chance the poor man would quickly make himself rich by trading to his own advantage.
Also, it is presumptuous（專橫的）to judge another according tohis or her apparent fortune. No man can ever truly understand the sufferings of his neighbor. A man who appears comfortably rich may have suffered elsewhere in his life - through the death of a loved one, for example. Retired businessmen have often worked long hours in their youth. Surely, it must be wiser to respect achievement than to deny that anyone has achieved good in the world.
To rely on notions of luck - to believe that life is a kind of lottery（碰運氣的事；彩票）- is an attempt to escape reality（是企圖脫離現實的表現）. Paradoxically,（自相矛盾地，相反地）the only time a person can claim that luck is moreimportant than work is when he reflects on his own success. Because of thatmodesty, the great man then becomes even greater.（小編認為文章作者用了很漂亮的例子，文章沒有正面論證他的觀點，而是通過許多偉人都知在逆境中努力獲得成功，由此來證明lucky has nothing to do with success，我認為這樣的寫法非常體現作者的critical thinking和論證功底，用了很多高難詞，希望大家把這篇文章拿下去好好學習一下）
好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）
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