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我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

13. Some people prefer to eat at food stands orrestaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do youprefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Topic 13 Eat out or eat at home?

Nowadays, some people like to eat at home and prepare food by themselves,but others prefer to eat outside in restaurants or at food stands. As far as Iam concerned, I prefer to eat at home.(標準式開頭，先闡述現今社會狀況，再表達個人觀點，開門見山)

Of course there are some advantages to eat out. Firstly, restaurantsoffer a more comfortable environment to eat and the food there tastes moredelicious than home-cooked meals. In addition, eating at restaurants is a goodway of getting together with friends. People also do not need to worry aboutwashing dishes and cleaning. For people who are too busy to cook, eating out iscertainly an ideal（理想的）choice. Furthermore, for people do not know how to cook and do not havesomeone to cook for them, eat out seems to be the only choice.（本段是讓步段，先講在外吃的好處一個是舒適的環境美味的食物，另一個是給不會做飯和不知做飯給誰的人提供吃飯的條件）

However, I prefer to cook and eat and home. The main reason is that athome, family members can prepare their meals and enjoying their food together,which can enhance their relationships. Family members can talk, make jokes andexchange feelings on current affairs with each other while preparing a meal.Parents have a chance to communicate with their kids and keep track of whatthey are thinking and doing; while children can learn to help with somehousehold tasks and develop intimacy（與父母增進感情）with their parents. Image that you and your brothers and sisters helpyour mother to cook on a weekend, and enjoy the food later on（稍后）, and you feel everything is so nice.（這是第一段論述在家吃好處是可以與家人增進感情種種，以自己為例子顯得生動可信）

Another reason is that eating at home can save money. The same amountof money that you spend on a meal in a restaurant can buy a lot more foods froma supermarket. You can use the money saved to buy a new cloth, or attend aconcert.（本段是從經濟方面來論述在家吃確實可行）

General speaking, eating out side is comfortable and convenient buteating at home has more benefits. I prefer to eat at home.（這篇文章是標準的議論文結構，沒有特別華麗的語言，但是結構清晰論述完整，沒有語法錯誤，這也是保分的必要條件）

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

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