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15. Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
參考分析: 共有8道題問及各種人的qualities或者characteristics。[103]提供了最好的答案:intelligence; honesty; a sense of humor。這些都是所有的人都應具備的基本優點。類似的還有optimistic and positive; politeness; loyalty;perseverance; justice等等。[46]要求回答Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture?而以上提到的各個特征都是remained unchanged in any culture, and any period of time的——相對容易回答(只需要說"從來就沒有變過"就可以了)。 相關題目:[18]、[22]、[46]、[62]、[93]、[103]、[179]。另外,174題的作文中(這一代人與上一代人有什么不同?)可以用一段的篇幅來描述一些不曾改變過的東西。 |
15、鄰居的素質 |
Topic 15 Qualities of a good neighbor
Speaking of the word 'neighbor', it arouses different responses among people. Some people may frown upon it, others might nod their heads at it with their wholehearted smile on their faces. No matter which category you belong to, as a person, especially as a person who has to live next to a neighbor, the concern on the qualities of a good neighbor is always a popular issue to bring about and to desire for. In my opinion, a good neighbor must be a friendly person, while at the same time, a person who is willing to offer help to youwhen you need the most.
As an important and fundamental quality of a good neighbor, she or hemust be kind and nice. Neighbors are those persons we meet in every day lifewhen we go in and out of the building. They are usually the people we meet atthe very beginning of the day, and whom again we will encounter at the end of the day. A nice and sincere smile on their faces, or a simple 'hello' as a warmstart of a day. In a very same way, a caring 'how was your day?' on your wayhome might be treated as a big comfort on your tiredness at the end of your working day. As nice neighbors, they have provided us a very cordial livingenvironment through their care and friendship.
Other than that, being able to help you out when it is necessary isalso considered as a significant trait of a good neighbor. Through our entirelives, there are numerous difficulties or troublesome situations that we haveto deal with. When those particular moments come into life, the first personcome into our mind is often our best friend or one of the relatives. However,most of the time, they cannot be the real person who we can rely on at those hard times. We will soon realize they are either too far away or they areunavailable right now. We all have once had these similar experiences. Thenhere is the moment where good neighbors should begin to play their helpful roles so that we can immediately turn to them for help and useful advice fordealing and solving the emergency, and so that we do not have to lose our mindsin trying to find everyone's phone number.
These are the precious and indispensable qualities of good neighbors.They are friendly and nice, and they will always be there ready for you whenyou need someone's help. Living with such a neighbor, you may start to sway at your old image of neighbor, and you may no longer frown upon that topic at thetime we talk about it.
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