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每天的寫作任務(wù)是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發(fā)至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進(jìn)入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進(jìn)行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進(jìn)行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

18. What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

Topic 18 Qualities of a good supervisor

Though everyone will work in different places such as a company, acollege or university, a factory and so on, I think there are the same standards judging a good supervisor in several aspects.（作者認(rèn)為盡管在不同的環(huán)境，但是衡量一個好的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者的方面應(yīng)該都是一樣的）

Firstly, a good supervisor treats his/her staff fairly. He knows how to balance the workload. He will not let some members of his staff do many things while others only do a few things. If he gives you a task, he will tell you in advance. Moreover, he will not ask you complete a project in a few days that actually needs half a month to do. A poor supervisor never considers his employee's feelings. A poor supervisor is usually not a good planer, so he is very nervous when a project comes to its deadline, and he will use his fault to punish his staff. A supervisor like this would certainly not benefit the company.（這段在說一個好的管理者能夠?qū)T工公平對待，正確衡量工作量。反之，一個不合格的上級就不能很好地計劃事情，還會因為自己完不成任務(wù)而懲罰員工。）

Secondly, a good supervisor praises or criticizes in a straightforward way. If you do very well, he will praise you, and encourage you to do better.If you have made a mistake, he will criticize you face to face, and he will not complain to your co-workers. He will also analyze how to improve your work and point out the ways to do thing right. Furthermore, he will encourage you and trust that you will do well next time.（本段在講好的上級能夠直接地表揚你和提出你的不足，這里也是講的好的管理者所應(yīng)具備的方面）

Thirdly, a good supervisor cares for his staff. He is aware of your feelings and emotions. When you are sick, he will send you flowers or visit you,or he will arrange other members of staff to see you if he is busy. He treatshis staff like family members. He is gentle and cheerful. Smile often appears on his face when he greets you. On the contrary, a poor supervisor often pretends to be serious. He never understands what his subordinates are thinking. His staff will never have a good mood when he is present at work.（好的上級會關(guān)心自己的下屬，所謂下屬得到關(guān)心和照顧才會更投入工作）

Finally, a good supervisor must set a good example to his staff. He must work hard, and has a strong sense of responsibility about his company. He must understand the operation of the company, and can do every staff's job in his department when necessary. That way he will win respect from his stuff and his spirit can motivate them.（最后一點，好的管理者應(yīng)該做一個典范）

In short, a good supervisor treats his workers fairly, cares for their feelings, treat them as family members, and set a good example for them.（這篇文章寫得還是不錯的，字?jǐn)?shù)也夠，各方面也說得很全面詳細(xì)，大家要朝這個方向努力啊！）

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習(xí)作文，每天進(jìn)步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質(zhì)的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

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