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Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^
我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。
每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。
在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！
20. It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do youagree or disagree ? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
參考分析： 不要急于同意或者不同意這個觀點。因為那個回答都有些片面。地點并不是影響孩子成長的唯一因素，也不是眾多因素中最重要的因素。----------思路分析 brainstorm
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20、不同意，兒童應當長在大城市---參考提綱 outline |
Topic 20 Countryside or city?
There are advantages and disadvantages for a child to grow up in the country or in a city. It's hard to say which is better. Growing up in the country means a certain degree of isolation. You're in a small town or on a farm with few people. In addition, the people you meet everyday tend to be just like you. Most have the same background with you, and go to the same schools with you. In the city, people you meet are all different. People come from different culture backgrounds.（作者在開頭的時候并沒有給出一個很確定的看法，到底支持哪一個）
City people tend to come from a lot of different places and move around a lot. So, there is not a sense of community in the city like what you have in the country. People in the city can live in the same apartment building for twenty years even without getting to know each other. In the country, however,everybody knows everybody. A child can get lost or hurt in the city and have noone to turn to. In the country, everyone is a neighbor, and people feel connected to each other.
A child in the city has a lot of interesting and exciting places to visit. He or she can go to a zoo, museums, art galleries and concerts. There are a lot of restaurants with different kinds of cuisines. It's easy to see new movies that come out. Children in the country don't have many activities to go to.
To my opinion, a childhood in the city is better because it prepares a child more for what real life is like.（但是作者通過文章中的細節論述，表達city比country好的各方面優勢，最后得出觀點，也還是不錯。PS：無論你再不確定你傾向于哪邊，你的結尾也一定要表達出你的prefer，否則分數會很低）
好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）
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