Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^

我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

17. Some people think that they can learn betterby themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better tohave a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop youressay.

Topic 17 Learn by yourself or with a teacher?

Some people prefer to learn by themselves. They think they can learn better in this way because they have more freedom, independence, and pressurein their self-study. There is some truth in their way, but they fail to see themany advantage of learning with a teacher. Especially, when you learn something more complicated, it is always best to have a teacher. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.（第一段清楚地表達了自己的觀點，還用了一些連詞來使句式靈活起來。不過通過我們之前看過了這么多的范文，這是一篇典型的“八股文”，有完整標準的框架，再加入自己的內容豐富起來就會比較好。）

First, a teacher can act as（扮演，擔任）a guide to lead you to success. When you grope for knowledge, you need help and advice.A teacher, who treats you as if you were his own child, will give you a hand when you encounter （遇到，這個詞也確實很經常遇到）difficulties; he will render（提出，比give好）his advice when you are in a dilemma（意同difficulties）. Without a guide, you would be searching in darkness without a torch to light the wayfor you.

What is more, a teacher exerts real pressure on you. If you study by yourself, you must be strong-minded enough to keep on. You may become indolent（懶惰的）for lack of a strong will. Studying under the guidance of a teacher, however, you will feel there is always someone to supervise you. The teacher may assign you some books to read or some homework to do. You must complete the assignments,or you will not pass the course. You are urged to go no by your teacher.

Last but not least, studying with a teacher will receive the benefit of the teacher's knowledge. In class, the best teachers do more than just go over the material in the text book. They teach students how to learn, how to absorb information and then apply what you have learned to other situations. They guide all of you on classroom to develop discussion of the material and provide extra materials to broaden the scope of the topic. Without the help of teacher,it is nearly impossible to get these skills just by reading the textbook yourself.

In short, I prefer go to class, studying with teacher to guide and urge（催促）me. I choose to learn in a big family----my school. If I was obliged（有責任的，名詞是obligation，替換responsibility時很有用）to learnby myself without a teacher or classmates, I would feel very sad and lonely.There would be no fun, no pressure, and no motivation. I could not learn well in such dull and depressing circumstances（壓抑的環境）.

（從字數來看，這是一篇比較豐富飽滿的文章，分數不會太低。大家平時要多練，考試的時候才能碼出400+甚至500+，這都是功底和努力決定的。其次，文章邏輯清晰，用詞得當，是一篇值得學習的佳作。）

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

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