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3. Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examplesto support your answer.

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Topic 3 Has the easiness of cookingimproved life?

Food has always been the one of thegreatest wants of humankind. It has influenced almost every step that humankindhas taken. The search for food is the essence（本質(zhì)，實(shí)質(zhì)）of life. Therefore if food is easier to get and prepare it is a realboon（有喝倒彩的意思，理解起來就是貶義）tohumankind.（本段開門見山，沒有多著筆墨，依舊是敘述一個(gè)常態(tài)，給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)）

Food is the most important of the threebasic amenities（令人愉快的事物，注意one of后面一定是復(fù)數(shù)）of life (water, food and shelter（庇護(hù)）). Though it can be argued that water is the sustenance（食物）for any life form, food is more important because if you do not havewater you will surely die. But if you are left with a scarcity（缺乏）of food it will lead to a very sickly and torturous life（虛弱和痛苦的生活）. Nutritious food is very essential for life, food has been thecause of many a battle. Thus if food was easier to prepare it will take awayfrom the mind of the humankind a great burden.（many a譯為許多；take away from譯為減損；本段意在講食物是三種基礎(chǔ)需求里最重要的，然后通過假設(shè)沒有水和沒有食物來進(jìn)行對比，從而推斷出食物容易得到的話會減輕許多負(fù)擔(dān)。）

Though the preparation of food becomingeasier, which is considered a great blessing for humankind. The sudden rise inprocessed and canned food and all the junk food that one gets over the counter（直接交易）is not totally a boon. People who are so busy that they are not ableto spend time to prepare their food, develop a liking for these ready-to-eatjunk food. Though it might be thought of as a great way to save time, this is ashortsighted idea that could actually lead to a world of harm. Because one mustunderstand that even though junk food saves us a lot of time, the nutritionalvalue of the food is not so good. In reality the preservatives used in thesefoods are often found to be toxic in nature. Hence it defeats the purpose it issupposed to serve i.e., to provide nutritional value.（本段敘述了食物變得越來越便利，垃圾食品雖然生產(chǎn)迅速食用方便，卻帶給我們身體更糟糕的影響）

Moreover since people do not take time toprepare food,the art of cooking is slowly vanishing.（這句話很文藝，烹飪藝術(shù)在慢慢消失）Actually cooking is a good way of releasing pressure that builds upfrom our professional commitments. Cooking can easily provide relief from allthe tensions that prevail in our life. In the past family weekend get togetherwas considered to be a good time to know each other and they used to spend timecooking food for the entire family. They used to exchange recipes and it was away of rewinding（倒回）after the hardweeklong labor. Thus this junk food has denied the human kind of one of humankind'soldest arts. It could even be termed as（被叫做）a retrograde（倒退的）step inhuman culture.（通過講烹飪的好處，客觀地說明現(xiàn)在食物便捷導(dǎo)致烹飪文化的逐漸落后，說明了食物便利的另一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)）

Therefore I believe though the processedfood（加工過的食品）has made thepreparation of food much easier, it is not a good step for mankind.（結(jié)尾很隨意，我認(rèn)為可以總結(jié)一下前兩段。本文依舊是經(jīng)典分段A+A-A-類型。個(gè)人感覺這個(gè)話題似乎說的很抽象，不知道改說些什么方面，大家仔細(xì)想想如果是自己的話會怎么寫，一般惡心的話題最適合動(dòng)一動(dòng)筆，經(jīng)常考題里出的就是最惡心的你最想略過的題）

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