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（四）Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1. 現(xiàn)在有越來越多的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員
2. 引起此現(xiàn)象的原因
3. 你的看法
● 審題概述●
本文是一篇主要論述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的原因和對此看法的文章。第一段，主要綜述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的現(xiàn)象。第二段，側(cè)重分析引起此現(xiàn)象的原因。第三段，重點(diǎn)談你對此的觀點(diǎn)。
【范文】
Craze for Civil Service Examinations
Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.
In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.
Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評：第一句總述人們蜂擁參加公務(wù)員招考，第二句點(diǎn)明大學(xué)生是其中的主力軍，第三句再述熱衷于公務(wù)員報(bào)考的大學(xué)生不僅有文科的，還有理工科的。
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
liberal arts majors文科專業(yè)學(xué)生
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評：先總述引起大學(xué)生熱衷報(bào)考公務(wù)員的兩點(diǎn)因素，再詳細(xì)分述。
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：
（1）On the one hand…On the other起到銜接上文作用
（2）is attributable to歸因于
（3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界經(jīng)濟(jì)
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評：重點(diǎn)談對大學(xué)生熱衷報(bào)考公務(wù)員的觀點(diǎn)。
◇語言點(diǎn)提示：beyond reproach無可厚非
