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（十）Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students
1. 金融危機給各行各業都造成了一定影響
2. 金融危機對大學生造成何種影響
3. 作為大學生，應怎樣應對這種影響
● 審題概述●
這是一篇主要論述金融危機與大學生關系的文章。第一段，概述金融危機給世界造成的影響。第二段，論述金融危機給大學生帶來的就業、經濟等影響。第三段，闡述大學生面對金融危機帶來的影響應提高專業技能等。
【范文】
Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students
Since the financial crisis swept the world, the global economy has sunk into a severe recession. It’s hard to get through a day without hearing or reading news about the devastating effects of the crisis: A world of companies go bankrupt, millions of employees are laid off, high-return investment bubbles burst, and huge sums of loans can never be retrieved. Its impact on our daily life can be felt in all walks of life.
College students inevitably fall victim to this pervasive slump as well. On top of that, internships and job vacancies are reduced to the minimum as companies keep shrinking. New graduates find themselves hard to get a job, not to speak of a satisfactory one. What comes next? Poor students will be hard-pressed if they find student loans unavailable any more. As a result, some even cannot afford to continue their studies. Lastly, more students are probably out there anxiously looking for part-time jobs now that they have to help cover their expenses in this gloomy economy. Their innocence and eagerness might be taken advantage of by some malicious businesspeople, or even criminal gang.
In response to these threats, we students must act promptly and wisely. Since we definitely will be facing a competitive job market, it’s crucial that we submit high quality resumes. Therefore, we must commit more to our professional studies. Even do better, master more relevant job skills as a double security. Furthermore, apply for scholarships and grants, as these are still available and we don’t have to pay them back. As for the safety issues, trust our instinct – there’s no free lunch in this world. Anything that promises quick returns without much work is a sure trap. Stay alert and protect ourselves.
◇第一段思路點評：概述金融危機給各行各業造成的影響。
◇語言點提示：
（1）severe recession嚴重衰退
（2）devastating effects毀滅性的后果
（3）go bankrupt破產
（4）high-return investment bubbles高回報投資泡沫
（5）retrieved追回、挽回
◇第二段思路點評：主要論述金融危機給大學生帶來影響。
◇語言點提示：
（1）slump 經濟蕭條、不景氣、經濟衰退
（2）internships 實習
（3）fall victim to 被降服、屈服于
（4）malicious惡毒的、惡意的
◇第三段思路點評：
闡述大學生如何應對金融危機的影響。
◇語言點提示：
注意since, therefore, furthermore等關聯詞的使用，使句間關系更加緊密。
