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（三）How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
1. 網絡提供給了人們豐富多彩和便捷的生活
2. 很多人開始感覺離開網絡寸步難行
3. 你對網絡依賴癥的看法
● 審題概述●
本文是一篇論述你對網絡與人們生活關系的文章。第一段，側重簡述網絡給人們生活的多彩、便利。第二段，詳述網絡與人們生活的緊密度。第三段，論述對網絡依賴的觀點。
【范文一】
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.
True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.
◇第一段思路點評：綜述網絡給人們生活帶來的多彩和便捷。兩個長句足矣。第一句用if引導的條件句引出“網絡”話題，第二句概述網絡帶給多彩和便捷的生活。
◇語言點提示：
has drawn…, realized, and provided此為謂語連動式的運用。
◇第二段思路點評：詳述網絡與人們生活的緊密關系，先總述，后分述。
◇語言點提示：
resort to借助、訴諸、求助于
◇第三段思路點評：先陳述人們對網絡的依賴，再談對此的看法。
◇語言點提示：
（1）negative effects副作用、反面作用
（2）addicts成癮者、依戀者
（3）fantasy world虛擬世界、虛幻世界
（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品
（5）fraud欺騙、詐騙
【范文二】
As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.
For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.
As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”
