88. Not only ___________________________ (他向我收費(fèi)過高), but he didn’t do a good repair job either.
[關(guān)鍵詞]收費(fèi)過高――overcharge, charge too much/high
[連 接]句首的Not only決定了倒裝連接,下文用了過去時(shí)態(tài),因此,這里需在he之前加did。
[優(yōu) 化](Not only) did he charge me too much/high, / did he overcharge me, …。
[點(diǎn) 評(píng)]如果未能想出用overcharge/charge too much表示“收費(fèi)過高”,也可以將其含義“化解”掉,用ask for too much來表達(dá),答案可以是did he ask me for too much。
89. Your losses in trade this year are nothing ___________________________(與我的相比).
[關(guān)鍵詞]相比――compare (with), in comparison with;我的――mine, my losses
[連 接]compare與其邏輯主語(yǔ)Your losses之間需采用被動(dòng)連接。
[優(yōu) 化]…in comparison with mine或compared with mine。
[點(diǎn) 評(píng)]此處最好用介詞詞組,如果用compared with mine,則放在句首更合適。
90. On average, it is said, visitors spend only ___________________________ (一半的錢) in a day in Leeds as in London.
[關(guān)鍵詞]一半――half;錢――money
[連 接]注意后文的as,此處需用一比較連接詞as,并在as后需增添一形容詞或副詞。
[優(yōu) 化]… half as much money。
[點(diǎn) 評(píng)]這里因?yàn)榍拔挠衧pend,這里可以省略money;此處如果先把“一半”的意思撇開,更易“化解”原文,即先譯出“一天里在利茲和在倫敦花同樣多的錢”,spend as much (money) in a day in Leeds as in London,然后將“(只有)一半”加進(jìn)去,這樣來看(only) half只能放在as much前。
91. By contrast, American mothers were more likely _______________________________ (把孩子的成功歸因于) natural talent.
[關(guān)鍵詞]孩子的成功――children’s success / success of the children;把……歸因于――attribute… to / owe… to
[連 接]上文的were more likely后需接to。
[優(yōu) 化]to attribute their children’s success / success of their children to…。
[點(diǎn) 評(píng)]“把……歸因于”也可以化解為“相信……的原因是……”,即believe that their children’s success is due to…/ the main factor for their children’s success is。