1.Whether a man writes well or ill, has much to say or little,if he cares about writing at all,he will appreciate the pleasures of composition.
無論寫得好壞，寫成多少，只要在意，就可嘗到謀章布局的樂趣。

解析:本句的主干為:he will appreciate the pleasures.Whether引導讓步狀語從句，該從句的謂語為并列writes well or ill和has much to say or little;該從句包含if引導的條件狀語從句，意為“只要他喜歡寫作”。主句中，介詞短語of composition作后置定語，修飾pleasures,意為“寫作的樂趣”。

2.Nevermind, for four hours, at any rate,we will withdraw ourselves from a common, ill-governed, and disorderly world, and with the key of fancy unlock that cupboard where all the good things of the infinite are put away.
沒有關系，不管怎么說，我們有四個小時可以躲開這俗氣的、治理不善的、雜亂無章的世界，并且用想象這把鑰匙，去開啟藏有大千世界一切寶物的小櫥。

解析:本句的主干為:we will withdraw ourselves,and unlock that cupboard。主句的謂語動詞包括and連接的withdraw和unlock。介詞短語for four hours和at any rate為狀語,修飾動詞withdraw,介詞短語from a…world也作狀語，表示“從何處逃離”；with the key of fancy為方式狀語，表示“用想象這把鑰匙”；where引導定語從句，修飾先行詞cupboard。