■他雖是個(gè)孩子, 但已干得很不錯(cuò)了。
誤:A child as [though] he was, he did quite well.
正:Child as (=though) he was, he did quite well.
析:在 as 引起的讓步狀語從句的倒裝形式中,置于句首的單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞通常不用冠詞。
■小孩喜歡像糖果和玩具之類的東西。
誤:Children like such things like candy and toys.
正:Children like such things as candy and toys.
析:在 such... as 是固定搭配,不要受漢語影響將 as 換成like 之類的詞。
■不要讀你看不懂的書。
誤:Don’t read such books that you don’t understand.
正:Don’t read such books as you don’t understand.
析:本來 such...as 和 such...that 都可以說,但在這兩個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)中,as是關(guān)系代詞,用以引導(dǎo)定語從句,且在此定語從句中用作 undeerstand的賓語;而 that 是連詞,用以引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句。比較:
誤:He is such a clever boy as we all like him.
正:He is such a clever boy that we all like him.
■既然你很忙,那就不必來了。
誤:As you are busy, so you needn’t come.
正:As you are busy, you needn’t come.
正:You are busy, so you needn’t come.
析:as 是從屬連詞,在此引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句;so 是并列連詞,在此連接一個(gè)并列句,所以此句結(jié)構(gòu)混亂,應(yīng)去掉其中一個(gè)。順 便說一句,若 as 引導(dǎo)方式狀語,則可以與 so 連用。如:As you treat me, so I shall treat you.(你怎樣對我,我就怎樣對你)。As you like music, so I like poetry.(正如你喜歡音樂,我喜歡詩歌)。
■我打算去郵局。——當(dāng)你在郵局的時(shí)候,請幫我買幾張郵票好嗎?
誤:I’m going to the post offic.—As you are there, can you get me some stamps?
正:I’m going to the post offic.—While you are there, can you get me some stamps?
析:as 引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句表示“當(dāng)...的時(shí)候”、“在... 期間” 時(shí),該從句的謂語通常是那些表示動作意義的動詞,而不能是 be(是,在), have(有),like(喜歡),belong(屬于)等表示狀 態(tài)或靜態(tài)意義的動詞。