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話劇社Drama Club
Hillary M. A final depiction of false impressions derived from image occurred in my own personal experience with a school play.As a member of my school's drama club,I shared the task of putting on the spring musical.My job was to scout talented,outgoing kids as possible actors and actresses.An acquaintance of mine,Derrick,was a soft-spoken basketball player who mostly kept to himself.Because of his quiet demeanor and jock reputation,I assumed Derrick would not be interested in the play and did not bother inviting him to the auditions. However, I was incredibly surprised when he attended anyway and gave a fantastic audition showcasing theatrical abilities no one knew he had. From that experience, I learned the meaning of the old proverb "You can't judge a book by its cover."

點評：這個段落詳略得當，句子結構多樣，Hillary用新聞人物的口吻引出主人公Derrick:“An acquaintance of mine, Derrick, was a soft-spoken basketball player who mostly kept to himself. Because of his quiet demeanor and jock reputation...”這讓讀者覺得與人物十分接近。而且，Hillary在結尾引用了名言，并強調她在這段經歷中學到的東西。寫的很好！