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Beatles
Mikk O. Music is a perfect example of society benefiting from goals.If musicians didn't write new songs,there wouldn't be any music.The Beatles truly show how making goals can change the world.With over twenty-five number one hits,with songs like Let it Be and Hey Judy,the song-writing duo of John Lennon and Paul McCartney were unstoppable.This success inspired many young songwriters,therefor bringing new fantastic bands like Led Zeppelin and Queen into the world.To put it simply,without the four Beatle members' goal of changing the world through music,we as a society wouldn't be the same.This success is truly for the record books.

點評：
這一段可以作為任何一個想要把音樂作為例子段的考生的作文模板，你可以把Beatles 換成Elvis 或是Rolling Stones，換成Bruce Springsteen 或是U2，換成任何跟音樂有關的人或者樂隊，只需要簡單的重述一下他們的主要熱門音樂以及對社會造成的影響就可以了。