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Elvis
Chris R. Finally the immortal Elvis Presley illustrates how creativity can alter the world around us.Elvis created an entirely original type of music by creatively combining the blues and rhythm into an intriguing new sound that captured the attention of the world.His flamboyant singing and dancing enthralled the new generation who would go on to become the counterculture rebellion.His creativity would inspire many people who would go on to play in bands like The Beatles,The Rolling Stones,The Eagles,Led Zeppelin,and The Who.If Elvis had not dared to be great,through creativity,the world as we know it would not be the same.

點評：
Chris 抓住了Elvis 創作力量的核心，說他結合了“blues and rhythm into an intriguing new sound that captured the attention of the world”。然后他又把Elvis 放到社會層面來解讀，說他“enthralled the new generation who would go on to become the counterculture rebellion.”很漂亮的概述！