Walt Whitman 的事跡
Clay C. Another example of the importance of originality is American poet Walt Whitman, whose innovative appreciation for nature, the human body, and patriotism contributed to his place as America's preeminent poet. Living during the 1800s. Whitman wrote several volumes of poems in which he expressed his respect for the beauty and spontaneity of nature. His use of free verse and audacious imagery invokes the ire of traditionalist poets; Whitman challenged the very concept of what poetry was. His famous poem "I hear America sing", "The Brooklyn Ferry", and his collection "Leaves of Grass" adulate the diversity of the American population and the beautiful uniqueness of the individual. Walt Whitman’s fearless divergence from accepted poetic styles and topics show his originality.

點評：Clay 連接兩次運用了令人印象深刻的詞匯和短語，比如“His use of free verse and audacious imagery invokes the ire of traditionalist poets”。同時，請注意 是如何列舉惠特曼的著作，并且用具體的細節來打動閱卷老師的。