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78. Is it more important to be able to work with a group ofpeople on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples tosupport your answer.
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Topic 78 Teamwork vs. working independently
Some people like to work independently, while others would prefer to work in a team.Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people in a team or to work independently? Depending on different personal traits and working environments,people will have different answer to this question. I think being able to workin a team is more important for me.
First,the modern society and industry is a complicated system that requires teamwork,communication and cooperation among companies and individuals. Take a computer system for example, it comprises of hardware, operating system and software, which are manufactured separately by different companies. Not one single company can accomplish a computer system without using products and technologies from other companies. Similarly, in a company, communication and teamwork is more and moreimportant among workers because a worker cannot do his/her work properly without interacting with his supervisor and colleagues.
Second,there are many advantages of working in a group than working alone. Teamwork provides a worker with a cooperative, friendly and enjoyable work environment. Thet eam can also be helpful in responding to a worker's questions and problems,therefore increase the work efficiency. Teamwork can also challenge a worker's abilities and he/she can acquire valuable experiences from it.
Third,the ability of working independently does not contradict with the ability towork in a team. For example, in a team environment, I enjoyed being a major contributor to my team. The fact that others depended on my work made me feellike I was doing worthwhile things. For example, I was in charge of the frontend for the GUI. This was very valuable experience, because I know how important it is to work in a team.
Inclusion,I think the most important quality in a work environment is the ability to work with others in a team.
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