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76. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school.Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
參考分析: 這是一個有爭議的話題。不同意這個觀點可能更好寫一些。
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76、同意孩子應當在一上學就學外語 |
Topic 76 Should children learn a foreign language?
Nowadays,some may hold the opinion that children should begin learning a foreignlanguage as soon as they start school, but others have a negative attitude thatlearning a foreign language early will pose too much pressure on kids and willaffect their mother-tongue learning. As far as I am concerned, I agree thatbilingual education should start as early as possible. My arguments for thispoint are listed as follows.
I agreewith the statement without reservation since children learn second languagesquickly than adults. As we have observed, children can learn languages fasterthan adults; immigrant children translate for their parents. Child learnersspeak without a foreign accent, whereas this is impossible for adult learners.Therefore the earlier kids learn a second language, the less difficulties they wouldmeet when they grow up and have to face a foreign language-speakingenvironment.
Anotherreason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that bilingualeducation can be fun and stimulate children's learning interest. Many parentsand teachers know how to teach kids a second language in an interesting way.One of my students told me that, when he was in kindergarten, every day his mumtaught him a few native language characters as well as their meaning in English.As time passed, the kid became keen to learn English. Sometimes he gave his mumand dad a quiz by speaking some English words and asking them what the meaningsare.
Bilingualeducation will not affect the mother-tongue study of children. As we are livingin an environment of pure native language conversations and traditionalculture, it is impossible for us to give up our culture and language. Teachersalso are trying to arrange the curriculum in a appropriate way. For instance,they create an English-speaking environment for children in the morning, and anative language-speaking environment in the afternoon.
Bilingualeducation has become a trend. No matter we like it or not, future educationalundertakings will become more international, and exchanges between schoolsthroughout the world will increase. Given this, speaking a common language isimportant and, to this purpose, bilingual teaching is an inevitable way.
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