Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^

我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

80. Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples.

Topic 80 Describe a custom from your country

Who took care of you before you are eligible to go to the daycare? That grandparents taking care of their baby grandchildren is a tradition in my country. I would like people from other countries to adopt this tradition.

At first thought, this tradition seems to be unimaginable to people who are accustomed to the "parents-children breeding" model. However, did you notice that swarm of young mothers are roaming in the department stores with their babies during working hours? Young ladies quit their jobs and sacrifice their careers to look after their offspring. How many women can really keep up with their professional work after several years' absence from their positions in such a fast pace society? A babysitter may help you, but do they really care your baby as his grandma does? The answer is No. Grandparents ensure the love, care, health and education of your kids.

On the other hand, senior citizens gain more happiness through this day to day caring of their young grandchildren. Old people are sad about the aging and loss of work. When they spend their time with young kids, when the fun and loveliness filled in their soul, all unhappiness disappears. The moments they spent together with the babies are so sweet they can improve seniors' mental and physical health.

It is undeniable that the relationships of different generations will be tightened. Needless to say, kids will be tied with their grandparents in this process. I was brought up by my grandparents who are in their nineties now. I still call them quite often and buy gifts for them. I feel the strong connection among us.

From above analysis, I highly recommend our custom of grandparents give their hand to cultivate future generation.

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

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