Morning~AmyLee要認真規(guī)劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優(yōu)秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發(fā)送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^

我已經(jīng)托福三戰(zhàn)過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發(fā)郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發(fā)至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

81. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons andexamples to support your opinion.

Topic 81 Has technolog y made the world better?

With the development of technology, there have been a lot of changes to our life.Admittedly, some of these changes are bad, causing many environmental and social problems. However, most of these changes contribute to making our life more convenient, more comfortable and more wonderful.

First ofall, due to the improvement of technology, people can enjoy more conveniences than ever. For example, it only takes travelers or businessmen several hours togo to another countries by jet planes, which makes the world seem to be muchsmaller. With the help of the Internet, people at different corners of the world can communicate with each other at a significantly high speed and low cost. It is technology that has cleared away the barriers that once prevented people from leading a convenient life.

Secondly,technology has made our life as comfortable as we can imagine. Sitting inair-conditioned rooms, people do not have to suffer the extremely cold or hot weather any more. Whatever vegetable or fruit we want to eat, we can always find it in a supermarket regardless of the season. We can also go to work in aplace far away from our homes by using automobiles or public transportation tools.

In addition, technology provides us many choices to spend our spare time.Listening to music by using an MD, MP3 or Walkman, surfing the Internet orwatching digital movies, all of these entertainments make our life wonderful.

In conclusion, although technology has brought about some problems, such as air pollution caused by increasing number of automobiles, and ethnic problems caused by cloning human beings, the benefits of technology far outweigh its badinfluences. So it is safe to say that technology has made the world a better place to live.

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質(zhì)的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

可可托福備考小組官方郵箱：Keke3096@qq.com

申請互批小組成員的郵件title：an application for writing members XXX（你的可可用戶名）

發(fā)送你的練習文章求批改的title：Essay 1 that need to be modified XXX（你的可可用戶名）