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Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^
我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。
每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。
在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！
35. Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, orsporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
參考分析： 同意或者不同意都是片面的。討論現場的好處(比如氣氛好air of excitement；投入感強getting involved)和電視轉播(television live show)的好處(比如，有解說commentary/commentator；多鏡頭various angle of view;鏡頭組接montage)，至于選擇，要視情況而定。
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35、參加現場表演比在家看電視好 |
Topic 35 Live vs.television broadcast
To many people, attending a live performance, such as a melodrama,a concert, or a sporting event is so incredibly attractive that they will goall out to get a ticket, regardless of the expense or the difficulty involved.But why not enjoy the performance on television while you can comfortably liein your sofa or couch with popcorn at hand? That is because attending a liveperformance provides you with far more enjoyment than watch it on TV.
In a live performance, you will feel that you are in the companyof many friends who are indulged in the same interest, who can share yoursorrow or pleasure or excitement. This kind of resonance at heart is so rarely sensedin our daily life that this one reason itself is sufficient enough for manypeople to attend a live performance. While watching it on TV, we certainly findit hard to feel the emotion sharing, and our loneliness is hardly mitigated.
Furthermore, attending a live performance gives you a senseof participation that cannot be replaced by watching on TV. Live performance isan interaction between the audience and the performers, and both parts of the performancedecide whether it will be a wonderful one. In this way, you may lament (哀嘆，文中譯為悲傷)or laugh, may sob or smile as you are soinfluenced by the misfortune or happiness of the characters. You may fall intothe indescribable intoxication（難以言表的陶醉之中）while listen to afavorite piece of music. And correspondingly, the performers will receive theresponse of their audience and act accordingly. So the final success of theperformance results also from the participation and interaction of theaudience, of which you are a member.
With these foregone advantages, we may say that attendingthe live performance is definitely much more enjoyable than TV watching.
好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）
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