Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^

我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

33. You have received a gift of money. The moneyis enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert youwant to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details tosupport your answer.

Topic 33Jewelry orconcert?

People make money for living first and then use the moneyfor other things that lead them to a happy and healthy life, such as buyingsomething they like, watching a movie, or eating a big meal. In my opinion, ifI have received a gift of money, I would like to buy a ticket to a concert.

For me, music is always attractive. When I have completeda whole day's study or finished the discussion on some academic problems, myspirit will be eager to relax for a while. When people want to relax, it is awonderful thing to go to a concert: the music playing on the concert is thebest thing to set your mind free. If you spend the money to listen to aconcert, you will fell that the cost is valuable.

In addition, you can attend the concert with yourfriends. It is a good chance to build up the relationship between your friendsand you. People are always busy with their work and study, losing manyoccasions of communicating with each other, a splendid concert and link ustogether. The music, the conductor and all the musicians on the concert canoffer us a common topic; we can discuss those things together.

Furthermore, listening to a concert let me learn moreabout music and all kinds of instruments, it also culture the appreciatoryability. To think that I spend the money to buy a piece of jewelry, I canacquire nothing but being a little bit beautiful at one of my friend's birthdayparties. In that case, I just fell that the money has gone.

Money, even a little money, can make your life more valuable,for this reason, I prefer to buy a ticket to a concert than to a piece of jewelry.

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

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