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So, what is the problem?
那么，這個問題是什么呢？
Once you have your opinion, once you've decided agree or disagree, say so once. Okay?
一旦你們有了自己的觀點，一旦你們決定了贊成還是不贊成，只說一次你們的觀點。
Use this pronoun: "I agree", "I think", "I believe", "In my opinion" one time in the entire essay.
這些代詞"I agree", "I think", "I believe", "In my opinion"在整篇作文里只用一次。
Do not say: "I think" two, three, four times, don't say it twice in the introduction, and then again in the conclusion.
不要說"I think"兩次、三次、四次，不要在開頭說兩次，然后在結尾又說一次。
Say it one time in the introduction if that's where your thesis is.
如果你們的論點在開頭的話，就在那兒說一次。
That's it, you're done, don't use the word: "I", "my", "me", "mine" any more in your essay.
就這樣，結束，不要再在你們的作文里用"I", "my", "me", "mine"這樣的單詞了。
The only time you can repeat the personal pronoun is if you have a very personal task question.
你們唯一能重復這種人稱代詞的時候是在你們有一個很個人的題目的時候。
Would you prefer to live in the city or the country?
你更愿意住在城市還是農村？
Okay, in that case, you can use "I", or "me", or "my" a few times, but even then, you don't need to, so don't.
在這種情況下，你們可以用幾次"I"或者 "me"或者"my"，但即使在這種時候，你們也不需要這么做，所以不要這么做。
One time, give me your opinion, that's it, don't give me any more.
一次，闡述你們的觀點，就一次，之后就不要再說了。
Now, what happens is I see quite often in the introduction, I see people say: "I think that A, B, C, which is why I believe C, D, E, F." Whatever.
事情是，我經常在開頭看見，我看見人們說：“我覺得A, B, C，所以我認為C, D, E, F. ”什么的。
Well, what is your thesis?
好吧，你們的論點是什么？
Is it the first one or the second one? Right?
是第一個還是第二個？
Usually it will be a bit clear what you're trying to say, but the fact that you say two opinions makes your thesis weak,
通常你們要表達的內容會有一點明了，但你們講了兩個觀點的事實會減弱你們的論點，
because I'm not sure, you're not taking a very firm stance.
因為我不確定你們采取的立場是否非常堅定。
If you think A, B, C, which is why you believe D, E, F, well, you only think A, B, C, which is not a very strong support for D, E, F or believing D, E, F.
如果你們覺得A, B, C，所以認為D, E, F，那你們認為的只有A, B, C，而這對D, E, F或認為D, E, F并沒有很強的支持。
Have one firm expression: "I think" something, done.
寫一個堅定的表達：我覺得什么什么，結束。
Support it the rest of the essay, in the conclusion, you can restate that opinion,
文章剩下的部分都用來支持這一觀點，你們可以在結尾重述一遍這個觀點，
but you don't have to say: "That is why I think", "In conclusion, I think this because that", no.
但你們不必說："That is why I think", "In conclusion, I think this because that"，不要這么說。
"In conclusion, parents make the best teachers for several reasons, including knowledge of their child and..."
"In conclusion, parents make the best teachers for several reasons, including knowledge of their child and..."（綜上所述，家長是最好的老師，原因包括對他們孩子的了解......）
whatever your second body paragraph was, I don't know, everybody has different ideas.
以及你們第二個正文段落的內容，每個人都有不同的想法。
One time in the whole essay, that's it.
整篇作文只說一次就夠了，不要再重復。
So, these are the five common mistakes people make, try to avoid them, your score will go up right away, I can promise you that.
這些是人們會犯的五個最常見的錯誤，盡量避免它們你們的成績就會立馬上升，這一點我可以跟你們保證。
If you have any questions, come to www.engvid.com, you can ask me questions in the forum, I will put a quiz to make sure you understand the key concepts, here.
如果有任何問題，請登陸engvid.com，你們可以在論壇里問我問題，我會在那兒上傳一個小測驗確保你們弄懂了關鍵概念。
If you need extra help, please visit my site, www.writetotop.com, I have a lot of useful tips for writing there as well.
如果需要額外幫助，請登陸我的網站www.writetotop.com，我在那兒也有很多對寫作有用的小技巧。
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請訂閱我的YouTube頻道，歡迎再次觀看我的視頻，下次見，再見。
