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Now we need to do the statement with the most important reason.
現(xiàn)在我們要為這個(gè)陳述句寫下最重要的原因。
So you've already given your reasons for this in the main body of your essay.
你們?cè)谧魑牡恼牟糠忠呀?jīng)給出過(guò)這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的好幾個(gè)原因了。
Now you just elaborate and tell us a little bit more about which reason you think is the most persuasive reason or the most important reason.
現(xiàn)在你們只要詳細(xì)描述一下，再稍微多寫一點(diǎn)你們認(rèn)為哪個(gè)是最有說(shuō)服力的原因或者最重要的原因。
For example: "The most important reason is because parents can share their life experience with their children."
比如： "The most important reason is because parents can share their life experience with their children."（最重要的原因是家長(zhǎng)可以和他們的孩子分享自己的人生經(jīng)驗(yàn)）。
There, I'm implying that maybe school teachers can't do this.
在這個(gè)句子中，我的隱含義是也許學(xué)校老師無(wú)法做到這一點(diǎn)。
This bit's done.
這部分也做完了。
And then, again, a moral or social observation.
接下來(lái)，依然還是要寫一個(gè)道德或社會(huì)觀察評(píng)價(jià)。
We're using the second conditional this time, and we use the second conditional to talk about imagined situation, so that means hypothetical situations.
這一次我們要用第二條件句，我們要用第二條件句來(lái)談?wù)撓胂蟮臓顩r，也就是假想情景的意思。
And it's different because we are using "would", and we're using the bare infinitive of the verb, and in the first clause we're using past simple.
這個(gè)的不同之處在于我們會(huì)用"would"和動(dòng)詞不帶to的不定式，在第一個(gè)從句里還要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。
So let's... let's read that last one: "If schools were to teach this" -teach children how to be good members of society- "the role of the family would be destroyed."
我們來(lái)讀一下這最后一句："If schools were to teach this"（如果學(xué)校要教這個(gè)的話）——教孩子們?nèi)绾纬蔀閮?yōu)秀的社會(huì)成員——"the role of the family would be destroyed."（家庭的作用就會(huì)被破壞）。
So that's quite moral, quite a strong opinion to leave your essay with.
這在作文結(jié)尾是個(gè)相當(dāng)有寓意的、相當(dāng)強(qiáng)烈的觀點(diǎn)。
And it does establish that: "I'm finished now. My very important essay is complete."
而且它確實(shí)給人一種“我現(xiàn)在寫完了，我的非常重要的作文結(jié)束了。”的感覺(jué)。
So, there are two ways of writing your conclusions for IELTS, CAE, or a similar discursive essay.
總結(jié)一下，雅思、CAE考試中的作文或者一個(gè)類似的論述文的結(jié)尾有兩種寫法。
There are many more imaginative ways to write essays, this is not a fixed rule.
還有很多更具想象力的寫作文的方法，規(guī)則不是一成不變的。
What can you take from this? You can take some phrases, you can start to think about the structure of your conclusion that you're writing.
今天的課上有什么能用的？你們可以把一些短語(yǔ)拿去用，你們可以開始思考自己要寫的結(jié)尾的結(jié)構(gòu)。
And hopefully when you get there in your exam, you won't get stuck in your conclusion, and you won't just rewrite the answer,
但愿你們?nèi)⒓涌荚嚨臅r(shí)候，不會(huì)被困在結(jié)尾部分不知道該怎么做，不用重新作答，
you'll have something a little bit different to say, also something that displays a little bit of clever grammar, like a second conditional in your essay.
希望你們會(huì)有一些不同的內(nèi)容可以寫，還有能稍稍展示出高明的語(yǔ)法的內(nèi)容，比如在作文里寫一個(gè)第二條件句。
So... yep, if you did like this lesson, please subscribe here on my engvid channel.
所以......沒(méi)錯(cuò)，如果你們喜歡我的課程，請(qǐng)?jiān)谶@里點(diǎn)擊訂閱我的engvid頻道。
Also you can do a quiz on this, so you can take this lesson a little bit further, do a little bit of extra work on it.
你們還可以做一個(gè)關(guān)于這堂課的小測(cè)驗(yàn)，這樣你們就能進(jìn)一步鞏固今天的內(nèi)容，稍微做一些與這相關(guān)的額外練習(xí)。
Plus you can subscribe on my personal channel, because I've got two channels.
另外，你們也可以訂閱我的個(gè)人頻道，因?yàn)槲矣袃蓚€(gè)頻道。
So, yep, I really do wish you luck on those exams, but I'm going now.
我衷心希望你們?cè)谶@些考試中能取得好成績(jī)，不過(guò)我現(xiàn)在要跟你們說(shuō)再見啦。
