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[示例二]
A Most Unlucky Day
1. 以“A Most Unlucky Day”為題，想想該怎么寫。注意：題目的中心詞是“unlucky”。
When:
Where:
Who:
What:
Why:
How:
[參考思路]
When：哪一天是最倒霉的日子？考前的晚上？公布成績(jī)的日子？周末？
Where：在大街上違章停車？在學(xué)校？在商場(chǎng)？在經(jīng)常光顧的地方——食堂、餐廳、麥當(dāng)勞、圖書館、溜冰場(chǎng)、投影廳？
Who：是我倒霉？是好友？你？那個(gè)蛋白質(zhì)室友？
What：拿到罰單？上課上班遲到？失戀？被竊？四級(jí)沒過？
Why：倒霉嘛，無非是運(yùn)氣不好，睡過頭了、態(tài)度惡劣、偷懶、不刻苦…
How：一團(tuán)糟，挨批，心情極度沮喪，不過也無所謂嘛…
想完之后，我們?cè)倩c(diǎn)兒功夫?qū)㈥P(guān)聯(lián)的東東挑出來，別忘了本文的中心是“unlucky”。
根據(jù)自己的思路，寫一篇文章：
[參考范文]
A Most Unlucky Day
I had a streak of tough luck yesterday. Everything, it seemed to me, went wrong. And I simply couldn’t understand why all the bad things happened to me in one single day.
In the morning, as luck would have it, my alarm clock didn’t ring, and with an aching head I woke up half an hour later than usual. I was in such a hurry that, when making an omelet, I got my fingers burnt and splashed the omelet all over the floor of the kitchen.
Having no time for my breakfast at that point, I rushed out of my house with an empty stomach and hurting fingers. I had intended to catch the 7:30 subway, but somehow I couldn’t make it. I became very nervous at the mere thought of being late for my English class, because my English teacher is very strict and demanding, and he gets angry whenever any student is late for his class.
After getting off the 7:40 subway, I raced all the way from the station to my school, thinking it would be impossible for me to flag a taxi at this hour of the day. At the corner of the street near my school, I abruptly bumped into a man and, worse luck, broke the glasses I had bought for 500 yuan just last week. With scarcely any time to receive or offer an apology, I just kept on running and running. At long last, I arrived at the school only to find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school was empty and the classrooms were all locked. It was Saturday.
My ill luck showed no sign of coming to an end. When I returned home greatly frustrated, I found myself locked out. In my hurry I had forgotten to bring the key with me. Just my luck!
[點(diǎn)評(píng)]這篇文章按照時(shí)間順序一氣呵成。文章的標(biāo)題、第一句和最后一句都點(diǎn)出了中心思想：“I had a most unlucky day”。故事從作者醒來開始，在慌慌張張中煎蛋卷、趕地鐵、急奔學(xué)校、撞破眼鏡、發(fā)現(xiàn)白忙乎了一場(chǎng)，最后猛然清醒——匆忙之中忘了鑰匙！整個(gè)故事描述得精彩生動(dòng)，既有動(dòng)作的細(xì)節(jié)又有作者內(nèi)心的感受，讓讀者也身臨其境地體會(huì)了倒霉的一天。
[示例三]
敘述一場(chǎng)交通事故
A: 根據(jù)以下提示敘述一場(chǎng)交通事故：1）用第一人稱；2）短語(yǔ)提示：drive home at about 30 kilometers an hour；it was dark；a small girl chased a dog；not hit her but hit a car in the other direction3）寫出作者對(duì)此交通意外的感想。
[參考范文]
Last night I was driving home from work. I had an accident. I was following behind a truck, driving at about 30 kilometers an hour. I was watching the traffic carefully because it was getting dark.
Suddenly a small girl ran onto the road from the left. She was chasing a dog and she wasn’t paying any attention to the traffic. I immediately applied the brakes and turned the steering wheel quickly to the right.
The girl jumped towards the side of the road as soon as she saw my car. Fortunately I did not hit her, but I hit a car coming in the other direction. Luckily I was not driving very fast so the damage was not serious. It is better to damage a car than to injure a young child, I thought to myself.
B: 以第一人稱寫一篇記敘文，講述在旅行中經(jīng)歷的一件小事。
[參考范文]
Go on a Mediterranean Journey
My wife and I have always enjoyed traveling by sea，and last year we decided to go on a Mediterranean journey. Although our holiday was rather expensive we thought that the high standard of accommodation, the first-class food and the many interesting places we saw were well worth the price we paid.
We found that most of the other passengers were friendly and interesting, but there was one man, a Mr. James, who irritated and annoyed us. Whatever subject we talked about, it seemed that he was an expert at it. He had, apparently, read more books, visited more countries and studied more languages, than anyone else had. After a few days, we ate our meals in silence, because nobody wanted to begin a conversation that would soon be taken over by this man.
Then my wife had an idea. She suggested that we might think of an unusual subject, look it up in an encyclopedia and then talk about it at dinner. If it were an unusual subject, Mr. James could not possibly know anything about it. The subject we chose was “English Agriculture in the Eleventh Century.” At dinner that night we discussed this subject with great enthusiasm. Mr. James was silent. We realized we had at last come to find something he knew nothing about.
| 重點(diǎn)單詞 | 查看全部解釋 | |||
| accommodation | [ə.kɔmə'deiʃn] |
想一想再看 |
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| relief | [ri'li:f] |
想一想再看 n. 減輕，解除，救濟(jì)(品), 安慰，浮雕，對(duì)比 |
聯(lián)想記憶 | |
| flag | [flæg] |
想一想再看 n. 旗，旗幟，信號(hào)旗 |
聯(lián)想記憶 | |
| enthusiasm | [in'θju:ziæzəm] |
想一想再看 n. 熱情，熱心;熱衷的事物 |
聯(lián)想記憶 | |
| strict | [strikt] |
想一想再看 adj. 嚴(yán)格的，精確的，完全的 |
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| intended | [in'tendid] |
想一想再看 adj. 故意的，有意的；打算中的 n. 已訂婚者 v. |
聯(lián)想記憶 | |
| impossible | [im'pɔsəbl] |
想一想再看 adj. 不可能的，做不到的 |
聯(lián)想記憶 | |
| wheel | [wi:l] |
想一想再看 n. 輪子，車輪，方向盤，周期，旋轉(zhuǎn) |
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| opportunity | [.ɔpə'tju:niti] |
想一想再看 n. 機(jī)會(huì)，時(shí)機(jī) |
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| silence | ['sailəns] |
想一想再看 n. 沉默，寂靜 |
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