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It says about a middle of page 32 line 2404
在32頁的2404行
"Yet they showed ever great even greater delight with Enid than with him
然而他們見到伊妮德比見到他表現出更大的快樂
because of the great beauty they saw in her and still more"
因為他們認為她非常美麗,還有更多其他的東西
So again where are we putting beauty?
我們如何定義美麗
Not as a foremost of her great qualities
最重要的是她的品質
but in some kind of a secondary position,
但還有一些其他的因素
still more for her open noble character
多數是出于她坦率高尚的性格
She seems pretty darn perfect to me or to the writer anyway
總的說對于作者和我來說她都是最美的
24 10 maybe
2410行 也許
"She was so charming, honorable, sensibly spoken
她是如此的迷人高貴 言行得體
and welcoming; pleasant, and friendly in her manner
如此的受人歡迎 如此的友好美麗
No one was ever so alert as to detect in her any folly, vice or baseness
沒有人會覺得她有一點的愚蠢 缺點 卑劣
Everyone, everybody loved her for her innate nobility
所有人 所有人都喜愛她與生俱來的貴族品質
and whoever could do her some service derive pride
不論是誰都以為她服務為豪
and personal satisfaction from doing so;
以為她服務來實現自我滿足
Not an ill word was spoken of her
沒有一句關于她的流言蜚語
for there was nothing anyone against her"
沒有任何人與她為敵
But now we get the problem
但是在這里我們遇到個問題
And you know, this is stated; it's right at the bottom of the page
你看到了吧 這里已經說了 在頁下方的右面
so maybe it's easy to miss
這個很容易被忽略
And remember wrote on the board last time I'm sure, I must hide this term in ballads, huh?
我記得很清楚我在上次把這個寫在了黑板上 我必須打個詞迷 ballads
But Erec was so deeply in love with her
但是艾瑞克深深地愛上了她
that he no longer took any interest in arms or attended tournaments
他已經對武器和比賽都失去了興趣
He no longer care to joust
他對競技比賽應經無所謂了
but spent his time playing the lover to his wife
而是一直跟他的妻子膩在一塊兒
So this is the flaw, and this is what we're gonna have to fix
這就是瑕疵所在的地方 也是我們要補充的地方
And so he loses his repute; he loses his fame
因此他丟了名聲 丟了榮譽
Everybody starts bad mouthing him behind his back
所有人開始在他背后說他壞話
And you know she hears this and she feels badly about it
你知道的聽說了這些她很難過
She feels it's her fault and you know that Erec is just a mess
她感覺是她的錯誤 害得艾瑞克變得一團糟
He's a mess
他已經糟糕透頂了
