貓頭鷹【隱形模板】托福系列之二
》老托福題庫185中可以挖出12道真題,只問“為什么?” 因此也只需回答“Why?”——無需爭(zhēng)辯。用簡(jiǎn)單而熟悉的結(jié)構(gòu)【起承轉(zhuǎn)合】便足以應(yīng)付。
寫作輸贏的關(guān)鍵在于【造句】與【論證】。如果菜鳥一時(shí)打造不出清楚,精簡(jiǎn),正確的英文句,那么也只好硬著頭皮背上幾句無中生有的【廢話】,好歹也湊字?jǐn)?shù)而又不跑題。每當(dāng)百思論證又不來電,建議磨刀十天,用功于名師慎小嶷的【裸奔寫作法】——縱橫聯(lián)想,前后連貫。
起:兩個(gè)理由A和B (三句話:1. A+B來答問題(這是主題)。2.仿寫廢話。3. 仿寫廢話。)
承:論證支持理由A (六句話:第一句招牌句Topic Sentence A,再延伸造加五句話)
轉(zhuǎn):論證支持理由B (六句話:第一句招牌句Topic Sentence B,再延伸加造五句話)
合:歸納理由A和B (三句話:第一句是A+B,再加兩句廢話)
》真題的題外指示:Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
溫習(xí)大綱:起3承6轉(zhuǎn)6合3
起 Introduction: 申論主題(一句答題,兩句廢話)再多的理由,也只許舉出AB兩個(gè)。
承 Body Paragraph A: 支持主題(理由A,+例子細(xì)節(jié))
轉(zhuǎn) Body Paragraph B: 支持主題(理由B,+例子細(xì)節(jié))
合 Conclusion: 重申主題(一句歸納A+B,兩句廢話)
》廢話連篇(低分模板):菜鳥可立于不敗之地。請(qǐng)檢驗(yàn)以下實(shí)例,看一看議論文的引言如此寫開頭三句話,是不是輕而易舉?第一句仿寫真題,第二句廢話,第三句還是廢話。(廢話最容易記住。)
——真題:【university】為何上大學(xué)?
起——引言
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why people attend university: career preparation and increased knowledge.
2. 廢話 Specifically, the two factors are what makes a difference in this respect. (可以改寫)
3. 廢話 Some relevant examples and details will be given to illustrate.(可以改寫)
合——結(jié)論
1. 歸納 In conclusion, without the benefits of career preparation and increased knowledge, people would not consider attending university.
2. 廢話 To some extent, people are able to experience a change of life. (可以改寫)
3. 廢話 And here lies the difference.(可以改寫)
——真題:【museum】博物館
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why people visit museums when they travel to new places: education and entertainment. 2. 廢話。 3. 廢話。
——【longevity】長(zhǎng)壽
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why people are living longer now: better living standards and better medical care.
【dangerous sports】危險(xiǎn)運(yùn)動(dòng)
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why some people are attracted to dangerous sports: fun and thrill.
——真題:【work】為何工作
1. 主題 Besides money, there are two other main reasons why people work: freedom from boredom and vice.
——真題:【gift】難忘禮物
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why people remember special gifts that they have received: the giver and the occasion.
——【read and write】會(huì)讀會(huì)寫
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why the ability to read and write is more important today than in the past: work and life.
——真題:【studying abroad】出國(guó)留學(xué)
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why many students study abroad: academic achievement and foreign language.
——真題:【music】音樂重要
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why people listen to music: audio enjoyment and killing time.
【organizations】團(tuán)體機(jī)構(gòu)
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why organizations are an important part of some people's lifes: sense of belonging and spirit of teamwrok.
——【movies】電影流行
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why movies are popular all over the world: entertainment and education.
——真題:【pets】飼養(yǎng)寵物
1. 主題 There are two main reasons why many people have a close relationship with their pets: companion and fun.