PROOFREADING & ERROR CORRECTION
1)illustrated,承接has shown and illustrated...
版本二:the改為a
(2) the little listener改為a little listener,因為是不確指
版本二:when改為until
(3)their改為his以于上文匹配
(4)something 改為somewhere,前者少指時間之長短
版本二:something改為anything
(5)therefore顯然應為however
(6) in the general去掉the
(7) currently 改為current
(8) it has passed along 改為 it has been passed
版本二:over and over 后面加again
(9) live 改為 alive
(10) to let alone去掉to 改為 let alone