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95. Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

參考分析:

  • 陳述the principle of capital/resource/money allocation(參見:[11]分析)

  • 陳述exploring outer space的重要性:國力(national power)的體現。參考例子:CNN曾有過一個專題節目(monograph)專門討論“美國人是否真的曾經登陸月球”(Did American Astronauts Really Reach the Moon.)結論是,美國政府作假(that event was a cheat)。

  • 陳述basic needs on Earth的重要性:多舉幾個例子。

  • 立場上,選擇后者應該更容易寫一些。

95、同意應當集中于地球的基本需要
(1)世界上很多人還很窮,沒有飯吃,政府應當解決他們的問題
(2)世界上的環境問題也很嚴重,空氣污染,所以政府應當花錢解決這些問題
(3)世界上的犯罪現象很嚴重,社會不安定,政府應當解決這些問題

Topic 95 Explore the outer space

The word "Space adventure" has captured a large number of people's heart. Many men have been attracted by the unknown world and have desired to live in space at some future time. The universe is the last and infinite unexplored region for human beings. However, space researches do not accomplish only by yearning. These researches cost hugely. Another way to express this is that spending money always has its opportunity cost. In other words, money spent on some venture could have been used for financing some other alternative venture. Some people believe that money spent on space research benefits all of humanity. Other people believe that there are better opportunities for spending this fund.

This first group of people claims that space researches have helped all of humanity's lives extremely. They point out that researches on space have informed us about much environmental damage which we have caused to our planet. Similarly, they declare that the present satellite system is due to the researches done in the past in space. There are also numerous new materials and inventions that can be traced directly to space researches. These people hope to spend more money on researches, visit all the planets, and build space colonies.

On the other hand, there are people who assert that money spent on space is a complete waste because it does not have sufficiently direct benefit to all the humanity. For instance, there is a sizable portion of the humanity does not have any access to food, education, sanitation, health care and especially peace.

Personally, I find that I cannot align myself completely with either group. I have some reservations about both positions. No one can deny that weather satellites and communication satellites are useful investments. But unrealistic researches like exploring Mars or Venus does not have any good bearing on most peoples' development at the present. Some scientists may be interested in the composition of those planets, but the opportunity cost is extraordinary. In my opinion, it may cause lack of social infrastructures, if states inject immense funds into space researches in the limited budget.

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