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94. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
參考分析： 這個題目乍看起來很不好寫。同意這個觀點(Dancing is really important in every culture.)。可以采取it depends的策略。舞蹈的娛樂作用(as a important mean of entertainments)也是important role in a culture，所以種文化中都有其獨特的舞蹈形式(dancing form)。 原始社會(primitive society)時，舞蹈是非常重要的。慶祝(celebration; festival)，祈禱(pray)，宗教儀式(ritual)等等活動中，舞蹈都是最主要的組成部分(one of the most important components)。 隨著社會的發展，宗教儀式(ritual)演變成了歌劇(opera)，舞蹈仍然是很重要的娛樂手段。 時間進入21世紀，各種娛樂手段開始豐富起來，舞蹈盡管已經不是主流的(main)娛樂方式，但是仍然非常重要。今年的奧斯卡(Oscar)得主就是一個歌舞劇(song and dance drama)——芝加哥(Chicago). |
94、同意跳舞在文化中扮演了重要角色。以拉丁舞為例子 |
Topic 94 Function of dancing
There are various elements in a country's culture, such as music, drama and dancing. These activities fulfill people's daily life and make the culture to become unique and colorful. Among these activities, dancing plays a very important role in a culture. I assert the statement due to three reasons as follows.
Firstly, dancing is one of the ways for people to communicate. Before human being can use language to communicate with each other, body language such as gesture is a good way to express what they want to say. Gradually, dancing has become a very important way for people to show their feelings. For example, dancing in celebrations can express feelings such as happiness, love or grief.
Secondly, dancing also reflects the diversity of a nation. There are different kinds of dances in different cultures. For instance, Flamenco is a famous dance in Span, and it reflects the culture of Span and the characteristics of the Spanish people. In many cultures, dancing has even become an integral part of their culture. Understanding the dancing of a country helps people to understand the culture of that country.
Thirdly, dancing can help create a lot of wonderful music. Dancing and music cannot be separated. When people dance, they usually need appropriate music to company. Tchaikovsky is one of the greatest composers in the world, and his famous work "Swan Lake" is created for the ballet. We almost can say that the ballet dancing gave Tchaikovsky inspirations to write the music.
Of course, other activities are all important for a culture. However, I especially mention dancing because the valid reasons I have present above.
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