Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^

我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

30. It has recently been announced that a new highschool may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

Topic 30Ahigh school in the community

I support the plan of building a new high school in my community,as currently there are no high schools in my community and the nearest one isalmost three miles away from the community.

Students in my community have to travel a long distance eitherby any available conveyance or independent transportation. As all of themcannot afford to have their own transport and the parents are also finding itdifficult to drop their children daily at the school that is far away fromtheir work places. As the high school is far away and many children have totake either auto rickshaws or buses, there is a traffic problem caused in theroute during the school days. There are also potential dangers as the autorickshaws tend to transport more children than it can carry, therefore there isa risk of accidents causing by these overcrowded autos.

Also the land that was allocated for high schoolconstruction is being encroached by private people. Our community mostlyconsists of middle class people, and they cannot afford to send their childrenon school buses and there is a lot of time being wasted on transportation to theschool. Our community consists of other facilities like a university and ahospital, but lacks a high school. It would also be comfortable for smallchildren to go to the school if it is made in our community and the parents wouldnot worry about dropping off their child at school.

Finally the high school that is going to be built in the communitycan also provide employment opportunities to college graduates who areunemployed in the community and ready to take up the teaching profession. In sum,I support that a new high school should be built in my community.

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）

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