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28. Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too muchattention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures andcelebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

Topic 28Media and celebrities

In this global information age where newspapers or magazinesare always handy and TV has already turned so many people into couch tomatoes,few people concern about what these mass media has brought to us; we just acceptit anyway. While I think the current focus on personal lives of famous peopleby these media requires further consideration.

Admittedly, it is reasonable for those media tocontinuously pay great attention to celebrities, the present fierce competitionof the various media, the hard-to-pleased audiences' taste, the bombasticeffect of coverage of these shining figures. No surprise sometimes that we feelwe just know more than those famous people than themselves.

However, the consequence of such intense coverage on publicfigures' personal lives not only violate those beingfocused on a certain level,but also do harm to us beinginformed in some ways. Firstly, the privacy ofthose celebrities is ineluctably encroached from time to time.Sometimes theresult is sad - do not forget the tragedy of Princess Diana. Secondly, ourattention is certainly being diverted by such tide of craziness aboutcelebrities. What about those viewers who want to see something about ordinarypeople' lives? How can mass media not concern more about those people sufferingfrom pain and poverty?

Furthermore, one of the significant results of thecurrent fad on famous figures is that their behavior is so influential while atthe same time the media have little guarantee to ensure what the say and dowill not mislead the mass public and even cause more problems. For example, ifa famous figure is being asked about his or her point of view in a field he orshe is not quite acquainted, the words presented to the audience may bemisleading. This is especially harmful to those young people who are morelikely to watch those programs of their idols, and also are mostly vulnerableto influential but harmful sayings.

In a sense, I do not quite appreciate the coverage of peoplein the center of spotlight, maybe once the mass media turn a little bit fromtheir current focus to other aspects of the society, they may find out that theworld is wonderful all the same.

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