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Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^
我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。
每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。
在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！
27. Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer.
參考分析： 這個statement里面的限定詞是sometimes。應該同意這個觀點。[63]可以作為[27]的理由之一，因為，Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future。這道題甚至可以作為[43]的答案。Most successful people have one thing in common: they are capable of doing things that they virtually do not enjoy doing. |
27、同意人們有時候要做自己不喜歡作的事情 |
Topic 27 Should people dothings that they do not like?
When it comes to the topic should people sometimes do thingsthat they do not enjoy doing, optimistic and pessimistic people have differentattitudes toward this topic. For me, a person who likes changes a little, Iwould prefer to do some different things sometimes even if I do not like them.There are many reasons why I should sometimes do things they do not enjoydoing.
The first reason is that I could get more experiencesfrom the things I am doing, no matter I enjoy it or not. There are pros andcons for every experience. What I learned from doing something I dislike is toconquer the similar situation and take the advantage of good changes I may encounteragain in the future. In addition, I will see such a disagreeable thing asdiversity to my routine life.
Secondly, many things which I do not enjoying doing can actuallydo well to me. For example, I do not like to sweat because it makes meuncomfortable with those sticky clothes and bad smell. But for exercise, the activitywill cause me to sweat, surely keep me in good shape and benefit my health.Besides, I feel happy whenever I see my figure become more slender. Moreover,Overcoming displeased things gives me a sense of achievement.
All in all, it is not bad for me to do something I do notenjoy doing. Therefore, I agree that people should sometimes do things thatthey do not enjoy doing.
好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）
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