Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^

我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。

在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

24. A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person wouldlike and dislikeabout living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Topic 24 The advantages of living in my city

It is almost always the case that a person who has been living in a rural area for a while confronts certain conveniences and inconveniences of living in a city. One convenience is the number and diversity of stores and shops available in a short distance in a city. A big inconvenience（麻煩）is the traffic congestion（交通堵塞）that takes place in many places.

One big thing I remind my foreign friend who is planning to move to my city is that there is cultural diversity, or even conflicts. My friend is an international student fromJapanwho is living in a small town in California. As a foreigner, he confronts（相當于encounter）with cultures of local people everyday. On the other hand he realizes that there are few stores and restaurants that are native to his culture. It is very normal that such a person gets homesick（想家）and starts missing people and foodstuffs（食品）from his own country. Moving to a big city will satisfy such needs of him because there are many stores, restaurants, and supermarkets that are run by Japanese companies so he will less likely to be homesick any more.

However, there is one big inconvenience about living in a city, which is traffic. Especially people who drive often feel stressed on the streets that are always packed with cars lining up in the streets（街上塞滿了車）. It is always difficult to find parking spots either in the parking lots or on the street. Furthermore, apartments do not always provide sufficient（足夠的，充分的）parking spots to their residents（居民）. A lot of people who live in city feel less convenient to keep cars and choose to use public transportation. However, unfortunately, the public transportation system is not perfectly great around my neighborhood.

My city satisfies and dissatisfies my foreign friend who drives. The availability of stores and shops that are native to his country soothes his dissatisfaction about being surrounded by different cultures. However, on the other hand, traffic jam that is always the problem in big cities gives new stress that he is currently free from. It is a matter of balance between the two features that he needs to settle in.

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦?。ɑヅ梢赃M步非常快，做過才知道?。?/p>

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