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Hi, everyone, I'm Jade, what we're talking about today is writing a conclusion for an IELTS exam or a CAE exam.
大家好，我是Jade，今天我要教你們在雅思考試或者CAE考試的作文中寫一個結尾部分。
So I'm going to give you two ways to write conclusions so that when you get to the end,
我會教給你們兩種寫結尾的方法，這樣當你們文章寫到最后的時候，
you don't just sort of put a full stop that doesn't really say anything extra, that doesn't feel like a conclusion.
就不會只寫個句號，什么額外的內容也不寫了，那樣看上去根本不像個結尾。
Because when you write a conclusion, a good conclusion has a different tone, there's something that feels finished about it.
因為當你們寫結尾時，一個好的結尾有一種不一樣的語氣，會讓人覺得這篇文章真的結束了。
And more generally, your conclusion should be your last chance to impress,
而且，通常結尾應該是你們最后一次能驚艷考官的機會，
to show that examiner all that English that you know and how fluent you are when you're writing in English.
能夠向他展示那些你們懂得的英語知識，以及你們在用英語寫作時有多么流利。
And you should leave the reader with an additional thought in the end, ideally, when you're writing a conclusion.
理想地來說，你們在寫結尾的時候，應該在文章最后給讀者留有想象空間。
So let's look at a typical IELTS kind of question.
我們來看一道典型的雅思作文題吧。
"Some people think that parents should teach their children to be good members of society.
“有些人認為家長應該教育他們的孩子成為優(yōu)秀的社會成員。
However, others believe school is the best place to learn this."
然而，其他人則認為學校才是學習這個的最佳場所。”
And then the IELTS question would say: "Share your experience, and give reasons for your answers."
然后雅思作文的題干會寫著：“請結合自身經(jīng)歷寫下你的看法，并給出理由。”
So let's imagine that you've already written your essay.
我們假設你們已經(jīng)寫了這篇作文了。
So, how do you begin your conclusion?
那么，結尾要如何下筆呢？
The... the first way I'm going to tell you, I'm going to call it the "As I have discussed" conclusion.
我要告訴你們的第一個方法，我稱它為"As I have discussed"式結尾。
And there are three parts to writing this conclusion.
這種結尾有三個部分。
And I'm giving you the structure so that you can see how you can put a conclusion together just by putting different pieces in there.
我會把整個結構給你們，這樣你們就知道如何通過僅僅把不同的部分放進去就能拼湊出一個結尾。
And now, this is... this is great for an IELTS essay.
這個方法對雅思考試的作文來說非常適用。
It's not a super imaginative kind of conclusion that would be great at university, but for IELTS, it's... it's good for IELTS.
雖然這不是非常適合于大學作文的那種極具想象力的結尾，但是對雅思考試來說......它很適合雅思考試。
So, here are the three parts for this conclusion: "As I have discussed".
下面是這種結尾的三個部分：第一部分是"As I have discussed"。
Then: "However" sentence with "I" or, you know, using your subjectivity, basically.
然后是帶"I"，或者任何主觀性詞匯的"However"句子。
And then making a moral or social observation in the first conditional.
最后一部分是用第一條件句做一個道德觀察評價或社會觀察評價。
