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童年是讓人一生都會懷念的時代。這個題目比較寬，看似容易，但是高分較難。回答時切忌使用大而空的總結(jié)式表述。不妨結(jié)合自己的實際情況，回答力求真實可靠。
Candidate 1: I often dream of returning to my childhood which is full of dreams, happiness and colors.
Before going to the kindergarten, I was living in the country with my grandparents. During that time, I could do whatever I want, such as going to the farm, playing games with boys and girls, and even with animals. We caught worms for the chickens and picked beautiful flowers to decorate our rooms. We drew on the wall and acted different roles as adults. What is more, we climbed to the roof of the houses while playing the game hide-and-seek(捉迷藏). Everything we did at that time was a reflection of our real emotion.
When I was 6, I went to the city with my parents and had to go to school. In the new place, I began to meet new people and things that were compeletly different from what I had seen before. Tall buildings took the place of(代替，取代) large farms and the games played at school were somewhat more formal than before. And for a child, what changed most was that I had to study. When I came home after class, homework came first. Only when homework was done could I play with friends or watch TV.
Even so, I think childhood is a valuable experience for everybody. I wish I could go back to my childhood again!
Candidate 1采用記述的形式回憶了自己的童年。通過把學(xué)到的歡樂的時光與就讀小學(xué)以后的緊張與壓力進行對照，更加突出了童年的無拘無束。
Candidate 2: I still remember the "data" chewing gun which had a strawberry taste, or the "head ice cream" which looked like a person's head. They were wo lovely and delicious. And I also remember the "big white rabbit candy". It tasted so warm and sweet that I can not forget it in my whole life.
Childhood is colorful, simple, happy...There are so many words to describe the past time when we have had. In my memory, childhood was full of delicious food. Every time when I went shopping with my mother, there would be half of the things belonging to be. At that time, I felt I was the happiest child in the world. Although the packages were not as beautiful as those of the snacks in the current market, they brought me perfect happiness. Whenever I think the taste of my childhood, I feel so warm and happy. Childhood is the memory which is worth keeping in mind forever.
開頭很有意思，美妙的童年在幾番味覺的記憶中展開， 視角新穎獨特，引人入勝。
Candidate 3: For most children, "happy" may be the most suitable word to descibe their childhood. But when ir comes to me, I will choose "meaningful" without hesitation.
Before my four-year-old birthday, my parents asked me whether I would like to learn something special. I thought it would be interesting, so I answered "of course". Then they took me to a musical school and I chose Pipa—one of our Chinese musical instruments immediately. Some days later, I got a Pipa as my birthday gift, which opened up a new world for me.
As I was the youngest child in the whole class, I must spend more efforts to keep up with others. At the beginning, it was difficult for me to recognize the music scores and even carry my instrument. I thought about giving up, but it were mum and dad who always gave me so much courages that made me never give up.
When all of my friends played games, I had no time to do that. Every night I had to practice, and at every weekend I had to attend classes. I hardly played with my friends, but when I played on the stage and got the prizes, all of them envied me and regretted not having learned something. At that time, I felt proud that I had made a right decision.
Graduately, I love Pipa more and more, and it has become part of my life. I will never give it up. I will always be proud of my "meaningful" childhood.
