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Friday is coming，樂加（happy+）的雅思兒們，就先忍忍，揉揉眼睛繼續來看。注意今天的寫法不同，是選擇了一個觀點來論證的，而之前都是辯證地來寫。如果語句不是很豐富，不主張這樣的寫法。Just relax and have a look at it.
Topic: Some people believe that children from poor backgrounds can be better prepared for the adult life than those from rich families. Do you agree?
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The state of poverty is reputed to possibly have a profound impact upon activating the wealth of potential from the minds of today's youth. As far as I am concerned, I agree to the opinion that children form poor backgrounds can be better prepared for adult life than those from the rich. In this essay, I would discuss my ideas. |
簡單明了地說出自己的點，家境不好的孩子能夠更適應成人的生活。 |
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The gauge of the richness of a family is probably how much the family earns for a living. It is of great significance to note that the mental and physical development of children is not only affected by the wealth of their family, but also other related factors such as the living conditions and the surroundings. Nevertheless, the impact that how much money a child's family has in store is quite remarkable. In my opinion, I am positively supportive of the assumption that poverty takes good care of what a child needs for their adult life. |
盡管家里的經濟條件對孩子的影響顯著，但是生長環境的影響也不可輕視。提出支持窮人的孩子早當家這個事實。 |
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For the rich children, the inherent and inevitable search for an easy and even lavish lifestyle is encouraged and fuelled by the wealth aplenty that is non-existent in the poor family. In contrast, the poverty-stricken children are compelled to accustom themselves to the hardship they are facing with, which makes them feel obliged to assume responsibility for helping the seniors by participating in the daily chores, such as plowing on a field, grooming horses in a stable, ect. |
對比家境好和家境差的孩子不同的思想，指出家境差的孩子要承擔的責任更多更大。 |
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The rich families dwelling in urban and suburban areas are notorious for fostering slovenliness and lavishness of the next generation, while the children from poor families who originate from the bedraggled sections of the countryside, derogatorily termed as 'rustic bumpkins' or 'yokels', are said to benefit from their poverty which manifests in their natural cultivation of certain characteristics such as diligence, the capability of bearing hardship and so on. |
家境差的孩子在惡劣的條件下，更加立，勤奮，抗挫能力強；家境好的孩子容易自私，只知索取，不知回報。 |
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In summation, I insist on the idea that children from poor families are better prepared for the adult life than their rich peers. |
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Vocabulary aquisition:
Keep your face always toward the sunshine，and shadows will fall behind you.--Walt Whitman 永遠面朝陽光吧，陰影就會被甩到后面。Happy+ ieltsers, come on. 加油！
gauge 規格，相當于第三天里的criteria，一種標準；測量
We must gauge the diameter of wire first.我們必須先測量電線的直徑。
The defence ministry is trying to gauge the extent of the leak.目前，韓國國防部正設法評估這次泄密的程度。
surrounding 人生長的環境，相當于environment，要會用
in store 貯藏著；準備著；將要發生
There are plenty of energy sources in store on earth.地球上貯藏著很多能源。
assumption 假定，設想，相當于view, opinion, 學會在一篇文章里換著用就行
inherent 固有的；內在的；與生俱來的，遺傳的
A love of music is inherent in human nature. 愛好音樂是人的天性。
lavish adj. 浪費的；豐富的；大方的 vt. 浪費；慷慨給予；濫用
Socialize with friends, but don't overspend on lavish entertainment.與朋友進行交往，但不要因奢侈款待而超支。
compelled to 被迫
He felt compelled to translate some of Nixon's musings into action.尼克松的有些想法他認為非得付諸行動不可。
accustom oneself to 使自己適應
To move to live in another country is easy, it's by no means to accustom oneself to the new culture and the new way of life of the country.要想移居并生活在另一個國家并不難，但要使自己適應移居國的文化以及改過人的生活方式可就不是一件輕而易舉的事情了。
feel obliged to 認為有義務
In such cases, some doctors feel obliged to hasten death.在這樣的案例當中，有些醫生認為有義務加速死亡。
assume responsibility=shoulder responsibility 承擔責任（雅思考試必備短語，記）
Assume responsibility for the department when the manager is absent or as needed.
經理不在時或有需要時負責部門工作。
dwell 居住
They dwell at unity with the natives.他們與當地人和睦地住在一起。
foster vt. 培養；養育，撫育；抱（希望等）adj. 收養的，養育的 （這個詞也常用，記）
Certain industries, such as the movies or banking, foster a particular culture.
某些行業企業文化獨特，例如電影業或銀行業。
slovenliness n. 邋遢；馬虎；懶散
derogatory 貶損的
He had drawn a derogatory statement from George.他已經逗出喬治一句毀貶的話。
rustic bumpkins=yokels 鄉巴佬，土包子
